Black Poetry : Standing Near You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 5, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the sexy way you walk and stand.
    A sight to see that warms the soul.
    Your inner beauty shines over your face.
    A beauty unchalleged bringing light.
    The energy you bring.
    Has opened up my existence.

    It can't be explained it's just the beauty of a woman.
    You stand before me as this dawn breaks.
    As the words came softly.
    You began to speak.
    When you speak melody sweet words.
    Just say anything.
    Ringing in my ear like no other.

    Stop. :D

    Don't do that. :nono:

    I know I shouldn't.
    I can't help but reach out and touch you.

    Feeling the push the pull of your aura.

    Sure your standing here.
    It's not a dream.
    I''ll touch your hand to show I care.
    I would like to run through your hair.
    Touch your arm.
    Look at your feet.
    Your toes so cute, baby such a treat.
    From head to toe.
    Back up again.

    Looking at you why should it end.

    All respect to the creation.
    Standing before me.
    Taking the time to bring a smile into this life of mine.
    Your so close I have no fear.
    Of letting you know how much I care.
    You can't bring me down.
    I'm not the one.
    That lucky man of yours.
    I hope he cherish you as much.
    You never miss until it's gone,
    wake before the silent tones of lonely hit home.
    To the treasure before you,
    that stands here now.
    What a lucky man.
     
  2. true love

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    As I stand before you
    Heart reaching out for you
    I'm giving my all to you
    I just wanna love you
    Watching your eyes travel
    From my head to my feet
    I get chills when you start to unravel
    My clothing tenderly
    Touch me right here
    Touch me right there
    Don't touch me there though
    Cause baby you know
    At any moment I will explode
    From the way you attend to me
    And appreciate me
    And touch me
    Baby just love me
    So I stand before you
    Basking in your loving and tantalizing gaze
    I bow down on my knees
    As if to pray
    For your touch
    Your caress
    Your lovingness
    Or to thank the Lord for such
    A beautiful man
    And it don't take much
    For you to make me
    Wet
    Just by you watching me
    I get
    Saturated, liberated
    My heart and mind tried to debate it
    But my heart won out
    So here I stand without a doubt
    Ready to be
    God's perfect gift to you.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    hodee, i feel ya brah

    da soul aches
    wit da heart breaks
    tear ducts weep lakes
    cause my happiness is at stake...

    stay strong

    and da ad lib collab between you and true
    was outasight
    dynomite
    supa tyte
    aiight
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling dis here i know where u coming & going here
    tyte
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow.... (snaps).. great expression....
    True Love ..blended on in so well... (snaps)... Flow on!
     
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    wow.........Hodee, this was a piece filled with a euphoric kind of
    feeling.........especially when you speak of the push and pull of
    her aura.........this one had me lifted within the passionate tone
    of this piece..........and of course we can't overlook truel love
    a la mode...no pun intended...

    Such beauty....you are really good at this :wink:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my Hodee :) i had to go back to the 5th page and I'm glad i did
    jus [email protected]!!! YOU and TRUE did tha [email protected] thing on this
    Hodee u had me blushin lol
    and then my sista True...I was like...yeah thas what I'm talkin bout lol

    I know the emotion
    commotion
    when u get the notion
    that love is ahead
    happiness instead
    of the loneliness and dread
    no need to pretend
    you've found that soul on which u can depend :)
     
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