Black Poetry : Standing In Suspense

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Apr 12, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    may the extent

    of your suspense be the stretching, bending motion of the universe as you cling together...

    suspended....(I LOVED THIS PIECE!)


    A
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD, this is so sweet. I enjoyed this so much.


    One
     
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    You a combining of words but I understand exactly what your saying. Keep on keep on gurl!
    Desert Storm
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Heeeey Cindy!

    thank you
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    most definitely

    keep writing those love poems
    we all enjoy so much

    poeticd
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Thanks UbZo

    what's the deal?
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    I Understand DS

    yes, i understand

    keep flowin' poeticd
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't that the truth! Love is hard to find. But when we do watch out! Well scribed poet, keep it flowing.

    one love,blak
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *while in my versaces*

    wooooow!!

    it amazes me how we share common interests..

    2 middle names
    2 meals a day
    liking the same songs.
    birthmarks in the same places
    (whoa!! did he go there,etc)
    what else????
    it was something important.
    wuz it hot wings and ranch??
    lol

    while we stand in suspense
    yet
    destiny still makes sense
    for you are my friend+
    my poetic delight
    my future tense....

    let's go back to the garden and eat herbs....
    and yes, da hot wings.
     
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