Black Poetry : Stand

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Aug 15, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    sittin here
    can't cry no more
    done all i can
    to open the door

    took more abuse
    than i have ever known
    criticisms and backlashes

    makes me wonder what for?

    tried to make u happy
    the best i knew how
    and out of all my doing
    none of it matters now

    u seem to think
    u don't need my love
    u don't need this world
    u don't need this girl

    i just couldn't keep up
    with the gossip and lies
    i just wanted to love you
    i just wanted the life

    u laffed at me
    made fun of my care
    told me to move on
    to someone else, somewhere

    but what about, but what about
    but what about and what about
    is what i ask myself

    it was all an illusion
    all just a dream
    like being shot in the daytime
    in the middle of the street

    all the hate you have for me
    is all the love i had for you
    but now i see theres nothing
    to do
    but
    stand.
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    i can relate
    we be standin together
    tyte piece/peace
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    [email protected]..
    this is really heartfelt...
    i rememba say'n those same words
    in a past lifetime...
    this was really good...
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...i feel ya...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff felt this piece
    very sadly felt deep within
    free ya mind , free ya self
     
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