Black Poetry : Stain On Da Glass

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Crystallizing love untouched yet seen
    clearly trainspaernt, I see da beauty
    stained upon da glass.
    Your transmitting lips substance was like
    cascading honey brownish red distinctly seen
    your crystalline structure give a definite form
    beautiful and spectacular review
    From the other side your imprint left
    sparkle my eyez as I beckon da taste
    so I place my lips next to yours.
    Kissing da stain left by you
    tasting your lippest of love, I felt Infiniti luxury
    to have shared such moment in tyme
    Implanting da glass stain close to my heart
    my beloveth i will alwayz revert back to you
    so i may drinketh behind your tasty lips dat stain my glass.
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    sparkles n' gleam shining crystal clear i need you !
     
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    Dear Brother Poet Rich,

    This piece is sweet. I love the idea behind it. There are some truly tender lines in here.
    Particularly like:

    "so I place my lips next to yours.
    Kissing da stain left by you"

    Enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.

    (smile)
     
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    I can definently "Feel" you, $$RICH$$ :)
     
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    welcome, and thankz for the visit and love shared upon da stain....
     
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    Can you !
    thankz for the visit and love shown upon the stain
     
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