Black Poetry : Staid Promises

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jun 25, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Checking you out...

    Checking us out, alright

    Checking or wrecking

    Ourselves out of love

    My checking account

    Been checking me out...

    Stepping out of line

    We gotta clown ~

    Whoa... on the rebound

    Letting them down

    Oh by and by

    I'm still the guy

    Promises made gonna fly

    Cause daddies like I never lie

    It's time to realize stay Black and die

    Responsibility eye on the prize!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :blowkiss:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
  2. Intrepid

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    Nice write
    flow on
    I liked this
     
  3. Poetrymama

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    re:Staid

    Very nice write.
     
  4. ladyafrika

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    nice write!!! Mos Def!!
    flowed real nice and tight...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man str8 up on point bruh !
     
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    Some promises made that are difficult to keep, yet somehow we do. Do flow on.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alright now!!!! flow on
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    like the title alot on this flow...
    like the flow too...
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, keep your eye on the prize.
     
  10. Prince Yakeem

    Prince Yakeem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the flow on this one..nice work!
     
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