Black Poetry : stages

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    she takes me through stages as
    she becomes both eve and the serpent
    tempting me with her thigh high boots
    me weaker than adam i taste
    paradise in the seepage
    between glistening thighs,
    her hands on my head as
    she rides features like a steed
    to some fairy tale in the city

    where dreams have already come true.
    ensorcelled, under her spell,
    i can tell that she's come by
    the nectar pouring down my
    throat, thick liquid coat as
    i swallow and lick, repeating
    the trick for she can get more
    than me so i give all that i can
    ,
    fingers become vise grips in
    the flesh of her *** as i keep her
    upright and she screams making
    angels turn in flight and listen
    to her passion.
    let her lay back on the bed as
    the rest of her clothes are
    shed like snake skin,
    along with mine, and her
    legs part and i am inside but
    only long enough to say hello.
    kiss her to give her
    a taste of what she blessed me with,
    she savors her flavor and i
    step to the head of the bed
    to feed her some more,
    she suckles as a baby at
    a mother's breast, she makes me
    feel maternal as i begin
    to protest that i don't want to
    come too soon,
    she says she don't give a ****
    by taking me deeper and humming
    a song that sends chills up my
    spine and across my balls and soon
    my st helens is erupting along with
    her swallowing, tasting
    doing her aftershock caresses and
    i almost run but she
    turns the tables and puts me
    down on my back, continues to
    clean my **** like a mother cat
    until i never get a chance
    to recover, still in the
    upright position and shes posting
    with no hesitation,
    kissing me so i can taste we on
    her tongue and she rides as
    the horse on the merry go round
    impaled on a pole for her
    up and down round, sensitivity
    paralyzes me, close my eyes still
    can see she looking goddess like to
    me, a scream as she drenches the bed
    sheets and me, a moan as she extracts
    more semen from me,
    her body aglow from the sweat and
    the moon, ensorcelled, under her spell,
    holding her, swoon in my arms
    still inside her and love is
    sometimes that way,
    cause i don't mind being
    under her spell... :thinking: :thinking: about sage......lol...hookup
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey HOOKUP seem like ya mesmerize in the depth of her bliss
    man i know how it can be rapture is wooooooweeee !
    I love the beat of this flow and the concepts .................
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aw man this is textbook for real just don't down my styles millions can write this style only a hand full can write mine feel me?
     
  4. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very vivid and descriptive piece of erotic poetry, i'm sure you're a hit with the ladies. well written and it flowed well. keep inkin em poet.

    Lyr1c
     
  5. angelicsage

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    Love...
    :weird: *whew*you got a sister over here
    sweating, and giggling, and blushing and drinking ice water...
    and-----> sweating, and giggling, and blushing and drinking ice water...mmm...mmm...mmm...mmm...mmm... :blush:
    You are a Poetic Virtuoso...
    that knows No boundaries or limitations
    existing on an algorithmic equation
    to which most never find the sum
    but you :wink: ...poet
    You have the answer to "free" verse
    and then some...
    and that some is what I have the pleasure
    of indulging in...
    You redefine erotica and poetry with style
    Dancing right on the edge of censorship, lol... :weird:
    and sometimes just diving right in...
    Just when I thought I had ...:blush: for the last time *whew*

    Now...u know

    I must reply...lol

    You can't just start a :hot: in my name and leave it burning...​
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His ominous manifestation
    Rouses my prowess…
    I rise / and seek him in the night
    A lioness in unforgiving heat…
    With 100 and 69 degree…
    mind burning intensity
    …there is no sleep /…there is no retreat
    His sex forbids me to be discrete
    I am replete with numberless heartbeats
    And throbbings that ache, solely for him…
    My thighs engorged with passion
    and skin, red like molten satin
    …I’m so hot
    I’m breathing fire…but he is the dragon…
    I come quickly, to the most cunning linguistics
    I’ve ever had the pleasure of interpreting
    Translate his message…
    and speak back to him in praying position
    Eyes lifted to heaven… to revel
    In the pleasure of his hedonistic expression

    He worships the walls of mi’ casa…
    Like a shrine…
    And I blossom, like a lily in the sun…
    Salivating….with feverish exhortations
    I creep through dark entangled jungles/…restless
    Seeking his unyielding offering
    Through loooooooong…hard nights
    Elation crowds my cranium pushing to get out
    My mind swimming with images of his face
    His hands, his back, his thighs, his…distance
    His thickness…His…his…his…
    His hotness, an ovation to my existence
    His sultry, like aloe and shea butter upon his palms…
    As he massages his love in and out…all night long
    I feel him etching his signature
    With moist fingertips and erect chisels…
    He blows the dust from my soul…To reveal his name…
    As it gleams, sparkles and glows…
    And with vocalized euphoria …
    I exhale his name… (((Hookup)))
    Scream his name…(((Hookup)))
    Inaudibly moan and croon sounds…
    That would be his name… (((Aaaaaauggggggggggg…Yesssssssssssss)))
    But I am unable to articulate…
    When he begins his ritual of tribal rain dancing
    Encircling the fire at the foot of my cavern
    Let the rains come down…he chants
    In ancient languages of African descent…
    As we skinny dip in the splashes
    Of the moon as it baths our skin in golden tint
    With handfuls of sheets and mouths giving intentionally
    brief interludes taken to catch our breath
    Our eyes…touch one another
    Tears streaming down my face…
    Our souls speak…
    A calm relief of silent whispers
    toxins…released
    As he turns the key and enters
    Freeing me…as I too, free him
    Our bodies breathe deep
    Our minds are serene…
    Within a spell of soul mating
    We become…complete

    Our essence entwined tightly in the rafters…
    Still singing like a choir of a thousand voices
    We rest, until morning…
    And then we start all over…again :angel1:

    :couple:----> :donttell:
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hookup and sage....I'll just say wow, get a glass of ice water, and sit down somewhere...By all means, flow on you two. :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  8. Leaky103

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    WHOA!!

    Is it love like WHOA!! Dang, you had me in the office salivating.
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    whoa nelly...now this is some hot ish...
    my goodness...
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. MADDRAPPER

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    This harmony gets like army jets fly through the sky

    Drop explosive slop and corrosives and slew a guy

    And for clowns don’t spell proper it will shoot down

    Your helicopter like a guerilla on a true thrilla no bounds

    When I begin to lay script it send cats on a ten-day trip to

    Australia with this paraphernalia
     
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