Quiet Poetry Lounge : STAGE PLAY

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~~Stage Play~~

    If the whole world is a stage, and everybody's playing their part
    then how do I know where I fit in your heart?

    How do I know, you're not just wasting time,
    at the cost of this heaped up heart of mine?

    When you say "I love you" ..do it really hold true,
    or is it just more stage words for you?

    Is that a part of the play, when you turn on your charms..
    then...
    stay out of reach of my two empty arms?

    When I said I'd love you...forever and a day,
    did you think it was merely a part of that play?

    Don't play me out, I'm not your toy
    I only strive to bring you joy

    I want to fill your deepest desire
    set not half, but your whole soul on fire

    Or am I asking more than you're willing to give,
    perhaps alone is how you choose to live

    well...

    If this is the whirl you got me in,
    then tomorrow I will be gone with the wind

    and...

    If this is the game that people play...
    If this is the reason that hearts go astray

    then...

    I choose not to crowd your stage or your space,
    you can find another actress, to take my place!​
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well U alwayz know thats its no "act" wit me...Great scribe, QT...




    Drizz
     
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    I like this piece for two reason.
    The way it ryhmes and the way it flows.
    You are getting a rep for this sister Queen.
    Awesome piece.
     
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    Gon sis... you BAD!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this just awesome , lovin it
     
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    Blaklioness Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .....And there it is!!!!! Pow! Pow! ....well done your Majesty!


    :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...Now, that was on point. To be or not to be? Not with thee if I'm just a game like monopoly. Well said!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Drizzle, I know your in my corner ...^5
    thanks for the drop-by
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ibrahim, being around good writers, gives me strength:weights: ...lol ...thanks a lot
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...who's bad! ...I'll wear that one.
    thanks sonnee for the luv
     
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