Black Poetry : Squirrels Are Smart In Life

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Squirrels Are Smart In Life

    Moisturize microphones with very wise tones with
    Art and spark, penetrate brains and create flames swift
    Enough to melt mainframes, stuff help the lame see
    The light, improve the dim groove of rap with smooth free
    Crap but my moves are zapped by problems just lose me
    Planning to flee standing under a tree look at a squirrel in a
    Shook world eating nuts to sweeten up his appetite so hey
    A corrupt sight but its aim maintained the glow
    With pride and provide food with attitude and go
    Back and proceed to feed its family but wow oh no!
    It dropped a slick nut hoped and picked it up continue on mission
    With menu and ammunition, sharp teeth and a marked fleece good decision
    It departs in peace after collision with mishap the smart never cease in vision

    (Moral of the story never give up when you drop that nut in life)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone:
    enjoyed the flow
    another madd creation!!!!!
    flow on....Angel
     
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    I see you still rockin the mic...
    the Maad way...

    Keep it flowin poet...
    Sage
     
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    Re: Squirrels

    Outstanding write. Always write . You don't use it you could lose it.
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for th elove on this one for real yall appreciate that
     
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    I do hear what you're saying madd, continue to stay at it :geek: we look forward to reading you.
     
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    Pick yourself up, dust yourself off, start all over again....Keep those flows rollin.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    stand on up again stronger dis was tyteeeeeeee!
     
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