Black Poetry : Spur of the Moment

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Feb 9, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i rocked you all nite

    you felt it despite

    the fact that you're married

    for years i've carried

    this crush on you, but you parried

    me away

    and i guess you did obey

    your heart

    and if you did, the fact that we're apart

    shows me that we have to start

    using AT&T

    so we can flee

    into a fantasy

    where your'e constantly handing me

    your friendship or your love

    either way i'll be your dove

    you can always rely on

    if i continue to try on

    will you finally see my plan

    and let me be your man

    i'm sort of like Peter Pan

    in a jar

    with your slices of bread

    we could talk in your car

    and use the jelly between us to go as far

    as we want to

    like "13 Ghosts" i'd haunt you

    but like a diamond i'd flaunt you

    to every guy in town

    while your wearing an elegant evening gown

    like "Pretty Woman" we've found

    a mutual understanding



    love,

    howard
     
  2. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the flow to this poem...emotion in every word

    bravo :cool:

    keep the flow going

    word from...
    MzSoulll aka Prizefighter16 bka SoulChildWritten
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that moment .....this was tyte
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was some write flo on.:hearts1:
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strange things have been known to happen in the spur of the moment:wink:
    Hi Howardtsu, welcome to our home...it's now yours too
    looking forward to you...doing ya thang, wonderful piece of work poet, thanks for sharing
     
  6. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEAUTIFUL POET! ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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