Black Poetry : Sprung?

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  1. ille$t poete$$

    ille$t poete$$ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh what his love does to me
    1 tender kiss from his lucious honey lips as he looks me deep into my eyes and holds my hips
    Sends chills from my toes to my finger tips
    At 1st it was his physical but now its his persona rockin' my mental
    Daydreamin of him 24/7
    1 minute of lookin in his eyes is 60 seconds of pure heaven
    Mesmorized I am by his touch
    Hypnotized I am by his hevean sent love
    An angel he must be
    Oh what his love does to me
    Never fake, he always keeps it real
    With his baggy jean thug appeal
    Respects my values and how i feel
    Never lies, he is always true
    Never puts me to shame by callin me outta name like most men do to make a woman feel vien
    Alwayz there when needed
    And even though he's fine as HELL ...
    Never conceded
    A little more then friends is what we've become
    Me feenin over him I cant overcome
    Am I just trippin or is he the 1?
    Got me ponder the question
    Am I in love?
    Or just sprung?
    Hmmm....? :confused:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said ....but one thing i ask that u edited the word N*gg*z
    we truely don't use this and it's on our banned word list please
    try not to go around the word we been labled this far to long to
    continue the use of it ...thank u
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    love...sprung...,sprung...love, who cares as long as it feels good to your soul...rock with it :love: ...don't fight the feelings. nice drop
     
  4. ille$t poete$$

    ille$t poete$$ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx for tha :heart: yall much appreciated :jumping:

    oh & my bad $$RICH$$... :oops: ...still kinna new to tha site didnt know...wont happen again ..trus!
     
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    I enjoyed reading this. Sprung? Maybe. Lovin his style? Definitely.
     
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    Sounds like both...
    I ain't mad at ya...
    Sounds wonderfully intoxicating :wink:
    Enjoying your flow!
     
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