Black Poetry : SPRINKLES OF SALT

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Flicked salt upon my wound
    stain of blood cast thy tomb
    feverish hub bitter sweet
    sorrow of heart now creep
    tales of yesteryears flow
    soon i hear the close of door
    salt left behind cyrstals flakes
    drifting windz body shakes
    Da voice speaks in quibbles
    continue massive nibbles

    Imprinted from secrecy memory
    every grain of salt laid become
    foolishly handed tryin to glow
    like a star searchin for a twinkle
    in da mist of day yet dark cloud
    roam the garden, just like a sour
    note that burns yet forgotten
    left for a lover that never was
    piles of brittle gritty pain hits
    furious soul embedded within

    Give away to da shocker
    like a health rim rocker
    sprinkles burn deep as blockers
    salty mist of gypsy
    dancin like an angel lover moons
    shrugging and loose lip tunes
    da crowds leap enticing the thrill
    of a bitter salty chill fill da room
    of silence breaking da creeds
    as da wound continues to bleed
    what a dirty deed

    Take my hand great friend
    and understand beyond seasons
    forth da reasons and come upon
    da delight our sunship and giggle
    the great breeze of windz has blown
    every grain of salt is swept away
    mend the tower and bridge the gap!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really nice!Very imaginitive!
     
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    Humble thankz Cursed heart for the warm visit and reply,

    when salt burns a open wound , to caress the pain that it
    has flicked is to embrace it so the gap don't open more,
    cool water and pressure and soon it meanz together like one
    whole again thankz for the read .
     
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    this sprinkles of salt is something i like the way you flowed, flow on rich!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    Thankz Nevar happy you was able to feel this
    and enjoy my twisted tale of salt and open wound
    good part is cool water and pressure do wonders
    if allowed .
     
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    As I read this, I imagined an image of salt in an open wound, and just how gingerly one has to cleanse it. If you rub it, that only makes it sting worse, it's a slow, gentle process in rinsing all of that salt out. Very well crafted scribe here Rich.
     
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    that is so true watz , if taken and handled
    too fast it can be even painful then at first
    gentle slow caressin and doctoring will do it
    and surely will mend well the gap will close up
    and surely ur smile again , Thankz sweetie for
    looking deep inside the salty wound from da sprinkles
     
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    HEALING WORDS

    SALT HMMMM ALMOST LIKE THE PILLAR OF SALT LEFT BY LOTS WIFE ...
    YOU ARE TRULY AWESOME .... DON'T LOOK BACK ... WHAT BEGAN AS SPINKLES AND GRAINS CAN TOO SOON BECOME POURS AND BLOCKS WITH A WOUND THAT WON'T HEAL ... THANKS FOR ADMINISTERING FIRST AID TO MY WOUNDS MANY TIMES .... IT DOESN'T HURT ANYMORE

    MS MOCHA B
     
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    yes most welcome Ms_MochaB
    the healing is within and knowing
    thy self the wound of salty sprinkles
    will wash away if handled with care
    Thank u so much for the warm visit & love sis.
     
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    There goes the mystery man. I love your flow
     
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