Quiet Poetry Lounge : Springtime Delight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 6, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I caught myself staring at a blossom falling
    It reminded me that Spring is calling
    Just as it landed beneath blooming trees
    It was swept away
    By a gentle Spring breeze

    This beautiful blossom
    Moving alone through the air
    Dancing so light
    Moving here
    moving there

    I could not remove my eyes from this sight
    A single blossom dancing
    A Springtime delight

    Of all that takes place when Spring is new
    This single blossom reminds me of you
    Fresh and alive though removed from its branch
    It takes on the world
    It takes the chance

    You are like spring
    Born of beauty
    A beautiful falling blossom
    My love
    Fall softly to me

    BE
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhhh!

    this was simply beautiful
    BE

    ~and u know this man :)
     
  3. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I fall near your feet,
    you gently hold me Heartbeat
    My softness you can feel,
    and my smell,it tastes so sweet
    A breeze carried me to you
    and you water me with love
    I fell from a branch,
    and then I fell in love...:heart:
    Thanks Heartbeat...BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
     
  4. TheRock

    TheRock Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flow Nita and Heartbeat

    Peace
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HeartBeat

    Surreal....this definitely did it for me!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cascading softly this was awesome bruh !
     
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