Black Poetry : Springtime Delight

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I caught myself staring at a blossom falling
    It reminded me that Spring is calling
    Just as it landed beneath blooming trees
    It was swept away
    By a gentle Spring breeze

    This beautiful blossom
    Moving alone through the air
    Dancing so light
    Moving here
    moving there

    I could not remove my eyes from this sight
    A single blossom dancing
    A Springtime delight

    Of all that takes place when Spring is new
    This single blossom reminds me of you
    Fresh and alive though removed from its branch
    It takes on the world
    It takes the chance

    You are like spring
    Born of beauty
    A beautiful falling blossom
    My love
    Fall softly to me

    BE
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spring is in the Air!!!

    That was nice...I am definetly going to have to post the one I wrote so you can read it. It's nice to know someone else indulges in the nature of spring.

    Shaneak
     
  3. alyce

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    prima vera!

    Thank you BE....(although the joy of spring is a year-round thang for some of us ~hehehehe)


    A

    :heart:
     
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    and i still see that blossom
    dancing in mid-air

    thank you for this Heartbeat

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    ***leaving the meadow holding blossoms***

    such a wondrous time when spring has filled the room. nice piece scribe. continue to bless us...

    ***returning to the meadow leaving a trail of blossoms***
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah,

    it be like that in the springtime!
    Thanks, BE

    saleem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY BE... I WISH IT HURRY UP!
    ITS COLD AND WET IN THE WINDY CITY OF CHI~TOWN
    BUT THE BLOOM IS ABOUT TO BLOSSOM
    THANX
     
  8. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    especially

    in the northeast, feeling the vibe
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah BE,

    Nice and smooth spring flow!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Lovin This!

    Lovin this also. Good piece. I like it!
    Desert Storm
     
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