Black Poetry : Spring Breeze......

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  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar:I awaken to sun rays across my thighs,

    :spinstar:I open the windows, and right before my eyes,

    :spinstar:you're lingering there,

    :spinstar:I feel as though I have not a care,

    :spinstar:in this world....

    :spinstar:I step onto my balcony, you hit me like a loaded nina,

    :spinstar:strong, but gentle.......you rejuvenate my soul like Aquafina,

    :spinstar:I shut my eyes, while you run through my hair,

    :spinstar:you feel oh so sensational against legs oiled & bare,

    :spinstar:you're always there when I need you at the right time of year,

    :spinstar:the echo of your whisper sweeps eerily past my ear,

    :spinstar:you're naughty at times when you lift my skirt,

    :spinstar:so strong yet passionate... you're such a flirt,

    :spinstar:arriving right after the cold, and just before the heat,

    :spinstar:I credit you for making my days & nights so sweet,

    :spinstar:It is you who puts the sashay in my sway,

    :spinstar:My affection for you intensifies as I approach the chilly Bay,

    :spinstar:your aroma so refreshing.....one whiff awakens my senses,

    :spinstar:Oh, my dear SPRING BREEZE....if we part, I'll surely suffer the consequences.

    :spinstar: :spinstar: :blush: :sand: :blush: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    ha....aiight marilyn monroe...
    the concept 4 this piece was mad thourough...
    supa tight...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    @Khasm13

    :thanks: , Just thought I'd share this moment.....as I woke up to a Spring Breezy morning....:coffee:
     
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    ummmmm! feeling the sweet hush of the spring breeze
    as it cascade swiftly cross my body , how nice it feel
    u painted the warmth of the opening spring...................
     
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    luvin yo flo my sistah
    dat was sweet real sweet
    man i wish i had a spring breeze...lol..naw jp
    nice drop
    so flo on like alwayz



    blackluv and bp
     
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    this was some flo spicy love the flo, flo on my sista.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the support....Nevar, GHETTOAMBITION, and $$RICH$$........Luv ya
     
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    Hey Spicy.... I just absolutely LOVE this piece!!! Spring is my favorite time of year. I look so forward to listening to the birds sing, and feeling the fresh breeze, I even enjoy the Spring time rain...wow I tell you I love everything about Spring.

    You FLOWED with this one sis...YES you did!!!
     
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    Yes indeed Sonnee, April showers brings May flowers, and Spring Breezes bring all the itching and sneezes. Oh well, 'tis still the most beautiful time of year;)

    :spinstar:
     
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    Very nice spicy:welldone:
     
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