Black Poetry : spontaneous thoughtz....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Jan 16, 2003.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i saw you yesterday
    and i could'nt help but wonder
    whut it was out there 2 years ago
    that was pullin' you under..
    at first we were the best of friends
    large amounts a money we'll spend
    to get our smoke on
    shemes we pulled
    plus on da sleeves of hopes' arms...
    frustrated from tha hate
    whut was waitin' at the gate??
    i bet ya it was him-
    the person who idolized everything thats fake...
    2 yrs to tha day
    i guess thats why i'm rememberin'
    you're crooked smile
    those idle eyes
    no surprise....its evident..
    you're brains r fried...
    its funny too 'cause you-
    f***ed me over..
    i still give ya a pound
    my minds' eye is seeing sober...
    but kno this:
    "hate is a terrible thing ta carry
    especially on hunched shoulders-
    the boulders of it can break
    ya down to tha ground- just wait
    and see but dont test me..."(get da flow?)

    you see my point
    when I throw a verbal dart...
    this really ain't directed to you
    its directed to tha heart
    of lost souls' stuck within
    the fields of drugs' evil garden...
    pardon the bluntness of my message
    i'll still start this- regardless- i'm starvin'...
    for a change on this gun range called life...
    real men shoot once
    cowards shoot twice...
    cold as blue ice..

    i do hope i see you again
    ''cause a
    friend is a friend
    there ain't no ends
    to forgivin' a friend
    again and again.....
    i kno i'm jumpy
    so question-"whut iz this about?"

    just remember-its all a game-

    3 strikes and you're out.....!!






    "this whole drug game is bigga than you"-krs one
     
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    LURK at work!

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    street life has a big package inside ......bigger then any..one know
    tell it all.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    -just whut i do best poet!!!

    $$Rich$$-and you're tellin' me!@!!???
     
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    Feeling ya...
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW..MEMORIESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! :laugh:
     
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    Strong ending...with some powerful messages
    I loved that metaphor about life being a gun range
    that was tight...actually there were too many classic quotables
    to quote...but know...I was diggin it!
     
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    To live a life where you're always ready to dodge the unexpected, just isn't natural, but for some it must become second nature. Your words hold much power, flow on.
     
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    Lurk, this is a powerful write of street live.
     
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