Black Poetry : Spontaneous Thoughts (Help me with a title)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Mar 12, 2002.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas

    Very touching piece.
    Thats a question I'd like to
    know the answer to.
    Enjoyed the read.

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WindBeneathMyPoeticWings.


    ...this was truly a delightful peace. :)

    aight! aight! aight!! i know that sounds a tad bit too
    phony for ya raggedy ***... so, i'll let you know that
    your words moved me (as they so extraoften do)...
    & i knew while i was reading how this one was gonna
    end. thanks for sharing your soul today, darlin!

    :heart:itsallLove.
    Elayne
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas....

    Those younger days were straight kewl like that!!!

    I remember 'em well my brotha!!!

    Excellent, excellent piece!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stay True!

    Coco~
    I believe I know the answer... it's not very rational but there's nothing like that pain. Thanks for being the first to peep!

    Madd Love


    Sunshower~
    I'm reading between your lines... I'm glad you feel me ma! Means a lot to know that I move you.

    You know what it iuh!


    Q!
    My Road dawg! Thanks my brutha for checkin fa me!

    Madd Love Yall
    Reas
     
  6. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason,

    i sprained my ankle this weekend. i think that the soul & heart breaks hurt a little more...but not much!


    tyte peace, poet

    dee
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep...yep.

    and they say men aren't sen-si-tive. add a sax to this flava and croon, Reas.

    very nice flow.
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very delightful read my brutha!!

    Moms and Pops should be proud!!:toast:
     
  9. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very sweet, very endearing. I'm touched and deeply moved.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa Reas take baller's advice bruh!!
     
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