Black Poetry : Spoken Word (Organum Massage)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Jyntlbreez, Nov 10, 2002.

  1. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As you began to speak
    It wasn't long before I
    Became completely enthralled
    In all
    You had to say

    You
    Put it down for me
    Conversationally
    Chosen words, precision tuned
    Intellectually

    My body glistened
    While I listened
    And....
    Indulged of essential oils
    D
    R
    I
    P
    P
    I
    N
    G
    From your tongue, (words)
    That would...spill over
    Into my mental

    -Organum-

    Suspended from your gentle

    Soft spoken undertones
    And the such,
    My, psyche anticipated
    Your next invigorating touch

    As Your vernacular
    Caressed, the far regions of my mind
    ...Oral foreplay, to my organum
    From your delightfully, erotic Dyction

    And I lie...Mesmerized
    Beneath your lexical prose
    And mentally succomb to your
    verbal love-making

    Cause' you see,
    For every lip-stroking, digital tongue glide
    That should...slip-slide
    Beyond the point of my pronaos
    I
    Arched my back to receive
    The essence of your soothing words
    As they massaged my womanhood

    And for every savory ambrosial phrase
    That have aroused the free-nerve endings
    Of my physical,
    Straight copulation with my
    Mental

    Leaving me, to pleasingly bask...
    Thoroughly satisfied....
    Sensually and mentally touched
    Under the motion of your "beckoning" tongue...

    Spoken word
    Massage my organum...
    As I
    Cum....
    To you....
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    breezy. breezy. breezy!


    thank you my poetic sistah... for gracing us with
    the beauty of your words once more!! :)
    i thorough-ly enjoyed the read... it's always such
    a very good thing when the right words... spoken
    by the right man... can move you in just the right
    way! :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    C
    ..U
    ....M
    to me
    amid cherry blossoms
    on a moonlit night
    that i might
    be
    blessed
    with
    the soothing touch
    of your
    jyntl caress
    beckoning me
    to your
    p
    s
    y
    c
    h
    e

    NICE TO READ YOU AGAIN.
     
  4. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elayne, my sistah' thank you for your encouraging response,You know...this piece was actually inspired by your"conversation kiss"
    Which i could completely feel! much luv to yah SIS!

    Baller thank you for the read...You keep talking like that, "Winter may have to find you in Connecticut" thanks for the love

    Jyntl
     
  5. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jyntle - i was totally feeling this piece...sometimes a man can say the right words and that conversation can elevate you to a place as good as sex...feeling it, felt it, flowing with it. Tite.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just steppin in to agree with all of the above!! lovin this peice (i did have to consult merriam before embarking..lol) nice...nice....
     
  7. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for taking the time to read!!

    To the "lady in Red" it's something about a man's conversation that flow's...Can take yah there !

    LiLi....I had my wordfinder handy too!! (Wanted to make sure it was all spelled correctly...LOL)
    Thanks again!
    Jyntl
     
  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my, my, my - how very vivid! :)
    Great piece!

    1luv
     
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    jyntle - poetically hot-to-the-mother-lover-of-poetry!
     
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