Black Poetry : Spoken Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Oct 26, 2003.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A pad, a pen,
    An inspiration
    And it begins

    A spark igniting into a roaring flame.
    Thoughts, born into words expressing your joys & pains.
    Gently caressing your mental with feathery fingertips massaging the thought patterns.

    Opening your mind's eye, giving you wings to gracefully soar with a bird's view.
    Instantly taking you to a land of bliss or a dreary hell.
    Imagine hearing the ringing of 50 thousand bells in harmony.
    In my belief, that's poetry.

    The basic essence of life is to be heard fully.
    I don't need you to agree, just listen to me.
    My mind wishes to speak.
    So I grab my pad and my pen, and I let them meet.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i so much understand...much love on dis...
    i pen
    a pad...
    just slide...
    glide ta yo words...
    just listen didnt ask
    just listen...
    poetry spoken in so many ways...
    love da vibe....
    ok ok i like this sorry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very smooth
    the pen n' pad glide
    this a ride i love tyteeeeeeeeeee positiveMind
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetry, ahhh poetry
     
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    seduction29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE..

    SHOULD I EVER EXPECT N E THING LESS FROM A TRUE POET?
    NEVER THAT...TIGHT CUZ....29
     
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