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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You keep asking me to talk
    But I have to walk
    For I know I will never get
    What I want from you
    Tell you what I feel
    Its sealed inside my heart
    I don’t think you can bare
    all I want of you
    I wanna know why you don’t love me
    Why can’t you see
    I can’t bare the pain
    Feeling all a shame
    And no one is to blame
    That I am in love with you
    And its tearing me apart
    Do you even care….
    Do you even dare?
    Friends we are and I can’t deal
    With the syndrome of being only
    Friends…..
    I want to hear you say you care for me
    The way you do when two is in love
    But….I know it will never happen
    Just to hear….you
    Tell me I am your only one..
    Just a dream within a tale
    For I know we cant be..and
    That we can’t be…

    (C) blackangel thang
     
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    Wow, honey, this is so achingly beautiful. Sendin you mad love :grouphug:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da love sis
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! dis speaks out
    anyone can hear u on dis i did!!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well glad you likes...
    it was a free flow
    listening to jazz
    and this what
    the music sound like
    as i listen to it

    thanks
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Touching...Are you sure you even want what he has to give? Going for the person you want is ok. But, if the person you want isn't ready for that type of relationship, is it worth it?

    :thanks: for sharing a part of your life with us.

    :toast:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i dont know if it is or not
    but its only a poem.... :spinstar:

    thanks 4 da love
    :angel1:
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: Loved the way you put this down, :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: Sometimes it is better said....on paper :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    Wow, Angel. I have been here before. It's like you peeked in my diary. Thanks for sharing with us.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Poets for the loving support always
    Peace
    Angel
     
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