Black Poetry : Split Second (musings)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Feb 14, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~My Valentine Offering, as requested by Alana~


    There are times like this
    when I'm feeling you
    watching me
    and I turn to see
    that reflection of myself
    in your translucent browns
    that transform me into
    what you perceive to be

    perfection

    ...and as I bask
    in the heat of your stare
    I become aware of how
    your sexy nostrils flare
    ever so slightly as
    you take me
    with those eyes...

    ...have you any idea how
    our connection is so vital
    to my life, my love?

    There is an invisible
    umbilicus through which we
    feed and nourish each other's
    souls...

    ...my eyes, now locked upon
    your gaze, open myself
    to your entry
    and you smile wide
    because you see

    perfection

    my love's reflection of you
    in me


    Alyce, (c) 1999
     
  2. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...see now!

    ...man!

    ...love and its force!
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Alyce you never cease to amaze
    such a gift you've been blessed with

    There is an invisible
    umbilicus through which we
    feed and nourish each other's
    souls...


    you feed many more than you know
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy Valentine's

    A Valentine worth remembering--a nice touch for this one--superb--Ra
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLAST from the past! 1poetsought
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    you been missed sistah A.
     
  7. OLMEC

    OLMEC Active Member MEMBER

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    sending my love

    loved the piece
    I needed that

    thanks
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved this poem!

    You know you touch my heart and soul with your egnimatic intellect and soulful prose...got me shivering in my winter clothes!

    Blessings on your house!
     
  9. Blkthunder

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    You took me back....
     
  10. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! I felt this one.
     
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