Black Poetry : Spiritual Warfare (Eyes of A Warrior 2)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Shortyreal, Sep 21, 2003.

  1. Shortyreal

    Shortyreal Member MEMBER

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    Some think life is a journey, and some say life is a Race* many thugs show no love think it's 'bout a paper chase* But I say life is a battle survived by only the strong* when my Soul is still sourin I say that life is a song* not many can see My vision not many reach for their dreams* I can achieve any Challenge and I will choose my own means* the righteous path I shall follow and I go straight by the book* I keep my head to The sky cause that's where I choose to look* I just shook the Earth below as if the demons don't know* I'm in this game to Be heard these skills ain't all just for show* a pure woman to The fullest from my head to the ground* Heavenly Father Please help me raise a nation that's sound* I'll earn my crown, Humbly lay it at the feet of the Lord* though we're all children Of God we're not all in one accord* thought we're supposed to Advance yet few are taking a chance* so tell me, how does it Feel to give the Devil a dance* like I don't know yet however I Have made my decision* you can't follow two masters in this Life that we livin* I follow no man but God in the flesh Jesus The Son* now I see paranoid brothers steady totin a gun* it Ain't no fun and this life ain't no walk in the park* but as for Me I'm still shining I'm a light in the dark* and a cruel world Children scared, demons roamin at night* now I'm talkin 'bout That real 'bout a spiritual fight* we're in a war
     
  2. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preach on....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it be heard shortyreal.................
    flow head on be one self
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shortyreal
    Welcome to DESTEE.

    This is a very tight flow. So real and sincere. Heart felt and seriously true. A dance with the devil. Won't happen here. Your flying on the wings of a spritual warrior.

    " I'm in this game to Be heard these skills ain't all just for show* a pure woman to The fullest from my head to the ground* Heavenly Father Please help me raise a nation that's sound* I'll earn my crown, Humbly lay it at the feet of the Lord* though we're all children Of God we're not all in one accord* "

    I like the whole poem.. but this portion is so real.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like your poem...
    very real
    great flow
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I grow up, can I be as talented as you. That was amazing.
     
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    Envy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow. I like it. Speaking truth, that's real.
     
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    That was tyte shorty. We are in a spiritual fight. You laid this one down!
     
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    you gots mad wizdom shorty
    keep kick'n da fly ish like dis
    peace
    khasm
     
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