Black Poetry : Spiritual Anomally

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by freedom Song, Nov 11, 2004.

  1. freedom Song

    freedom Song Member MEMBER

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    I saw minds moving in the outer shell of misery.
    Not bound by the retardation of the conviction chosen by the words of the opposed.
    Thick in the skies freedom rang.
    I saw God with every man at his right side.
    Chosen Holy.

    Inspired by the notion of compassion written in these words made biblical
    It was critical I surrender truth to the chastised and brutalized.
    Informing them of the glory that lay ahead to revere the dead in flesh.

    Follow the man to the depths of his core.
    There you will find his misunderstood theory on the cosmos of life.
    Unfold to reveal his yearnings and loves where he departed from this life.
    Travel the distance that manifested into spiritual brilliance conforming into excellence in the eyes of perfection.

    God is there.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    this was on point and true he's near and their indeed
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    yes freedom SONG God is there
    God is here God is everywhere
    and you so fully expressed the need
    for us to see to know it...

    i love your name
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reading this gave me a feeling of ease, being reminded of God's presence no matter where. Flow on, and welcome.
     
  5. Joemama0203

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    Wow. Very caliming and beautiful. Let's us all know God and his compassion is always there with ALL of us no matter our situation. Keep flowing. :welldone:
     
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    Welcome to destee.com
    very well posed and done
    enjoyed this read....

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    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. Khasm13

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    this flowed so smoothly
    welcome poet...please share more...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was very peaceful just as I imagine God is peaceful when we remember that in everything God is there. Welcome poet...great piece keep the flow coming. Flow on!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Praise God!

    Blessings, Freedom Song.
     
  10. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    . you came through with a beautiful poem...very insightful,
    Welcome to Destee,

    and those lasts words

    God is there,
    not only completed the poem, for me
    but gave it more life
    as if that statement meant preservation through any part of life that one is going through
    God is there
    so much that it is less explanatory and more just understood
    this poem touched my heart
    keep the flow goin

    and peace out!
     
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