Black Poetry : Spirited Wind

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  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love Hurts
    Mad
    Fustrated
    &
    Confused
    I’ve been abused
    badly beaten
    by the ways of Love
    Mad that Love
    refuses to show
    her face
    Fustrated while trying
    to find Love
    Confused with being
    used by Love’s
    own craving for
    connecting
    in the physical
    forgetting all that is
    mental
    Lost in the Mind
    by illusions
    of real love
    good love
    pure love
    consisting of trust
    I must
    find Love to heal this
    wounded soul
    Drowned with misery
    of being lonesome
    in addition to
    No Love to share
    No Love to give
    No Love to receive
    I’m just
    battling within
    while talking with
    the wind...
    I see Love everyday
    in the way
    the way the trees sway
    the gift of today
    and
    in every beating heart
    of soul
    I see Love
    and it makes me
    happy
    But inside of me?
    There is a blackhole
    ready to be filled
    by Love’s own
    intuition
    I
    petition
    my soul
    heart
    & mind
    for Love
    I would...
    if I
    could...
    But where is Love?
    Is she standing there
    in front of me?
    What about behind me?
    Is she beside me?
    Over me?
    Under me?
    Searching
    Looking
    Seeking
    for the face of Love
    Deep within the
    wind
    there is a sweet
    sweet spirit
    that
    speaks to me
    softly and gently
    while inserting Love
    inside of me.:heart:
     
  2. dnommo

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    i see your verse speaks of the wind and love as one...this is a good sign of one who is deeply wrapped in spirituality...stay deep within the word of GOd and love HIM without question...Then the love you seek will appear...

    know that she is being formed as you are being created...

    one.


    oh yeah..tight scirbe...:D
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Dnommo

    Glad u liked.:)
     
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    luuuuuuuv

    this piece: raw and real...
    thank you for sharing.
    -7
     
  5. MsBerry_98

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    ding, ding, ding, ding, ding

    You won! I am more amazed by your gift everyday... keep it up, bro. :kiss:
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Preciate yall

    Wildflower, Much love for ya and thanks for reading.
    MsB, sis, I'm amazed as well it's just rolling over here.
    and thanks for taking time, love ya!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazed bro!!! amazed. i can feel the breeze!!!

    keep the flow
    k laB
     
  8. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for stopping through!

    K-la, thanks poet just writing what the wind sends.
    Thank you for reading.:)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad,

    I am loving this. Great piece. Keep feeding me, your flavor is good.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  10. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Coco

    I tried to work this piece right and tyte.
    I appreciate ya for reading.
    U B feeding me too.;)
     
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