Black Poetry : Spirit

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by WindWalker, Mar 18, 2002.

  1. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spirit

    This poem is called “Spirit”
    Why?
    Well, because it cannot be seen,
    and that’s the basic reason, “why.”

    Look down below, look down:
    twenty one absolutely exquisite lines
    of the greatest wisdom ever put down
    upon nothing – to be read by no one.
    Isn’t this simply amazing?

    Twenty one lines, and not a one
    will anybody ever see and read,
    and that’s a miracle, if you ask me!

    It may seem silly, this unwritten stuff,
    but I assure you
    there is great rejoicing in heaven
    for one human has finally written
    a truly spiritual poem!

    And now, friends, only in spirit
    can anyone ever know
    the life impressions expressed below.





















    Ah, Men!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing.
     
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    as i ponder the beauty of this reality
    and the wisdom you've shown in bringing it
    let me say that i marvel at your artistry.
    THANK YOU, WindWalker, for bringing this to me.

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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can dig it!!

    Thank God for your spirit Windwalker!!:)
    And expression of the Soul...
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    ahHHHA!

    VERY,very nice flow

    always in spirit

    *walking in the wind*

    pd :)
     
  6. Destee

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    Thank you WindWalker for these 21 spirit filled lines.
    Reading each one slowly ... with my eyes closed ...
    as I feel the spirit of your poetry ... Thank You.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was truely a twist of thought
    tight flow poet
     
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