Black Poetry : Spirit Horse (I still hear u)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Nov 19, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Punishments of pain calls
    late nites
    with great fights to think on
    the damned insist to go ablaze
    if they can't be pardoned anyway
    trials and tribulations
    you MUST be brave
    facing mild skirmishes
    and bullets on parade
    your flesh can shave
    young chests can cave
    befriending weaponry
    metal formed and polished
    to spit projectiles carrying fatal promises
    sheets of pureed
    wood carrying knowledges
    deeper than leagues through the universe
    psalms with context-encrypted yet delivered
    demanding man to act as
    gods and goddesses
    ability and passion
    opportunity models it
    deep discretion
    curves and turns
    checking speed, wind resistance, and lift
    what a curse , what a gift
    pursuit of a death so swift

    One love, 1000 - big up, 2_, da'dead, da congregation...

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely laid out to canvas here tyte drop
     
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    Wonderful script, and very knowledgeable wisdom...well crafted, thanks for sharing your insight.
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    A death defying spirit that never completely leaves us. Keep those flows coming.
     
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    awesome scribe! nice to read you again.
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankx for the support everybody
    good to be back

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