Black Poetry : SPILLED BLOOD

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Poverty still abound
    in the cries of hollow sound
    da struggle continue to mound
    like a spill i've stumbled and found

    Hear my people in da silent tone
    singing da freedom sad old song
    and the beaten brothers moan
    as da blood run deep within da home

    Dreamin to one day conquer thy stay
    with an ambition from da body dat lay'
    seem like a bitter defeat
    from da blood that lingers and leaks
    upon the walls of city streets

    Concealed from da crowd
    remembering thy past lace'd da cloud
    discomfort dat remaind
    from da spill of blood that stains
    i cry out in hope
    people this entrapment is no joke

    My mind drift deeper and deeper
    am i now my brother's keeper
    where i watch and see us weaker
    destroyed by the system seekers
    this ameri land stolen blood
    at da devils hand

    All i see and feel is da spilled blood
     
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    $$RICH$$ YOU HAVE OPENED TRUTH HERE INDEED TYTE FLO
    FLO ON BROTHER FLO ON
    MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    i see it too

    There is enough misery to go around
    Everyone's just about to touch ground
    Poverty growing by leaps and bounds
    There seems to be no happiness found

    All I can hear is the cries of my brothers
    Howling for the destruction of others
    and the dreadful wailing of the mothers
    Wondering why the biological didn't bother

    In the hands of the little ones I see dope
    Other tethering at the end of their rope
    Wondering how long they'll be able to cope
    Wishing and praying for their ray of hope

    Wanting to pull them out the miry clay
    But as if trapped in sinking sand they stay
    Sinking further into their own filthy way
    Wasting their life as if it's game to play

    Living, surviving, and dying in this hood
    Stocking misery in the cabinet like food
    entrapment inside of this cage for good
    All I can see and feel is the spilled blood
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    This is an EXECELLENT write.
    But Im not surprised, Poetic Master
    always creating Master Pieces.
     
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    sweetee big thankz and yes indeed the truth must be told

    asimplepoet that was amazingly awesome thank you for adding
    the final touch and open light to da realism of life and the streets
    of da hoods we so liveth

    4EVERLUV thank you so much for the warmth and such high praise
     
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    Oh my...

    Heart-wrenching flow Brother $$RICH$$:crying:

    :picture:
     
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    Thank you sista spicybrown
     
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    Da blood still drips rapidly and it's all i see ................
     
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    i felt this piece when reading it really touched me. hey richy rich if you like come check your sis out at myspacenevar112 if you like. hope to hear from ya!!!!!!!
     
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    surely i will pay a visit sis and thankz for feeling me here .
     
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