Black Poetry : Spider's Web

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  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is like a spider's web
    So complex and beautiful
    It has the power to snare your heart
    And at the same time kill your hopes and dreams
    Get you so twisted up you don't know up from down
    When you think you've finally conquered it
    And can find your way safely through its traps
    The elusive feeling/concept of love disappears
    What once seemed so strong and binding
    Snaps at a single touch from the wrong hands
    What took hours, days, and weeks to build
    Destroyed, torn apart, blown away in a blink
    Then the long fall to dispair, grief and sleepless nights
    But you have to have the strength to crawl back up
    And...
    Start over again
    Weaving as if your heart has never been broken
    As if you don't know the pain of defeat
    As if you don't know...
    Just focus on making your web grow
    And avoiding being captured by its
    Ever so sticky threads
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved your simile of love being like a spider's web. You spun a hard truth into a delicately posed scribe.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    choclatangel:
    What is really good...I havent seen you around in
    a minute....and you come back with a really righteous piece
    Your joint is so on point.

    Much Luv
     
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    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmmmmmm
    mad snappage on this joint sis.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true love is a web of grace and deception in a twisted maze
    one make it be what they wish it to be good or bad ...............
     
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    Hi
    I enjoyed how you use the spider web to spin the road of love
    it hit on some wonderfuls point. Of not given up on love
    some time we have to start over again.
    Very nice poem

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Thinking back and i found this web piece that reminded me to beware....yet openly !
     
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