Black Poetry : Spicy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, May 27, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spicy
    cool and gentle feisty
    were the words for her eyes
    ...tap dancing a lover's romance
    from brutha to brutha
    'round a crowded room

    the illusion of her REALness
    had eluded her

    who is she?

    corn-rolled extensions
    hanging loosely
    beaded and color-coded
    she filet'd it
    'til that brutha laid it aside
    ...left her searching for the wise
    in her wisdom
    drowning in a sea of
    make-believe fun

    her blue contacts
    were a topic of some interest
    none could get with this
    ATTITUDE
    that spelled
    S.E.R.I.O.U.S *****
    lashes
    nails
    was anything about her REAL?
    a stripper's attire
    with "paid for" sex appeal
    a tummy-tuck last summer
    a nose job before that
    she trimmed down her waistline
    ...did away with the baby fat
    eyes...deep set
    her chin was made pointy
    lips...glossy thick
    all luscious and pouty

    she's a hottie
    all the fellas told her so
    but when her OVEN filled with heat
    she didn't open wide...for any to know

    a "HO...HO...HO" cried the sistahz
    whenever she came their way
    eyes of daggers staring into her
    the foulest things they had to say

    to
    Spicy
    naughty...like winter icy
    or...was she?
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed reading this one...

    it's sad how people don't take the time to look at the person..they only see an image and judge accordingly...and most times their judgement is way off base...

    K
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man this is too deep and you touched all bases while drawing no conclusion just like an artist is supposed to do
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u posed a realist picture wit da deepest vibe
    tyght scribe BALLER......
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hAHAHAHAHAH!

    They think so ,but they don't really know!
    Hey baller this reminds me of a couple I wrote back
    when I was just on the playground...
    *Glamour Girls and Unapproachable You!
    Boy, you betta not be plegarizing:D :D
    Just joking...I know some of these sista's
    and the real deal that I feel is , WHY!?
    Why do we have to recreate ourselves to be loved?
    LOveded...
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  6. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller like the way you brought this one bruh.....
     
  7. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i love reading your work

    keep writing :)

    pd
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FAM. really appreciate ya words.

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