Black Poetry : Sperm Donors - One Man's Point Of View

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jul 25, 2001.

  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    attach this...

    ...to every store...to every hotel door...to every street corner where the brutha was standing when he got that boner...that he might begin to understand...EVERY BOY DON'T NECESSARILY BECOME A MAN.

    flow, So'ja.
     
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    Well I see we got

    One man up in here. Yo..this is nice... Funny thing is I said the same thing about my real father a few years ago. Man...if they only knew. Yo...i'm diggin this..the style, the detail..the debt...the words i'm just loving all this...
     
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    True dat So'Ja...

    Because you some "baby mama daddy" doesn't make you a FATHER!!!

    I feel ya bro!!!

    Peace
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    So'ja,

    man this is what is needed. I feel you on this and i commend your scribe. I took a whiole to respond for a comment made in here by one who read it was a little offensive to the "real men" in the room. I took a moment to not allow that concept prevent me from posting to one of the true poets in the house...

    Definitely feeling ya bro' in more ways than one...
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    GQ - thank for your undying support it does not go unnoticed

    Sha - this happens anyway everyday in America and i'm glad you liked the flow

    Baller - your name alone holds weight with me dun, and that's for your comments for a "real man"

    MO - you know my respect for you is unchanging, for someone to be offended by my work is tough because what i wrote is not fiction its' real
    so the "men' that were offended must have been ones who did something like this hey everybody has a situation sometimes parents can't be there for the off-spring this was written for those who blatantly avoid their responsibilties. not for someone who had an unfortunate situation


    and MO - if these "men" are offended tell them to be offended by my life in these city streets that almost killed me a couple times because at times i'm offended by the context of my life
    and you know me better than most people on this page
    and you know i'm about spreading love
    but i have to spread the truth too.
    and somethings people don't love the truth


    peace to my "real soldiers"


    DSSNY
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BOYZ 2 MEN

    SO FEW UNDERSTAND THE TRUTH
    MAN U KNOW DES NEED TO HIT EVERY
    BILLBOARD ACROSS THE WORLD
    SEE MAKING A CHILD DON'T MAKE A MAN
    TAKING CARE OF THE CHILD MAKE U A MAN
    BUT TAKING CARE AND HANDLING THE WHOLE
    PACKAGE MAKE U A FATHER.....TYGHT TRUTH U SPEAK
     
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    BOYZ 2 MEN

    SO FEW UNDERSTAND THE TRUTH
    MAN U KNOW DES NEED TO HIT EVERY
    BILLBOARD ACROSS THE WORLD
    SEE MAKING A CHILD DON'T MAKE A MAN
    TAKING CARE OF THE CHILD MAKE U A MAN
    BUT TAKING CARE AND HANDLING THE WHOLE
    PACKAGE MAKE U A FATHER.....TYGHT TRUTH U SPEAK;)
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    what is a reality for some

    is not a reality for others


    $$RICH$$ - you my dawg you know the crease

    >DSSNY
     
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    MAN!!

    I lived in this from da streets of chi~town
    to the home of confussed souls
    what is reality in life can sometyme be a fat MYTH !
    yet the truth is told in BOLD LETTERS
     
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