Black Poetry : Spellbound

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B-O-U-N-D,
    she had me tied to her
    by will alone,
    enchanted
    my mind became tangent
    to each one
    of her curves,
    how she dynamically flowed
    as her beauty showed
    me each magnetic quality,
    like impulse to nerve
    it hit,
    I was lit up like a slew of simultaneous novas
    reflecting her entrancing shine,
    I was engulfed and submerged
    in her divine brinks,
    it converged on addiction,
    the constant urge
    to be the
    focus of her attention,
    she’s like a drug,
    and, more and more,
    I’ve found
    that the
    intoxicating levels
    of pleasure
    she supplies,
    arousing overwhelming sensations,
    perfection before my eyes,
    exciting, inviting, like cloudless blue skies,
    makes me aware
    that she has me
    spellbound
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah... i do have that
    affect sometimes... :D



    SIKE!! -7:spinstar:
     
  3. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..you can feel the intensity while reading this! :flamet:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    100% ova flo and u can capture da emotions from dis piece
    well done poet!
     
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    once again u got me ..... no i am the one spellbound by u...... bravo baby, bravo !!!!!
     
  6. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is the reason...

    ...I make it a point to check out the works of Family Poets I have not previously read. Always run across a reward like this when I do so. Thank you for sharing this, Tarheel Poet.

    Nia
     
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    Wonderful expressions from u fam
    All I can say is....SPELLBOUND; I am!!!!
     
  8. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all so much for reading and responding....the love is like a warm cup of tea on a cold rainy day.....and it's reflected right back to all of you...

    :D wildflower--- you really do have me spellbound!!! your creative genius is like woah!! keep it up

    LiLi---I appreciate it so much....thanks for read....much love

    $$RICH$$--well, you open up the flood gates with yours, I'm just learning from great example

    herlove---wow, I have someone spellbound :cool:....haha... you know that you're good for my ego, right :D...thanks for the praise...it means alot

    Nia--- thank you so much....both for responding and for bringing to my attention that I need to start reading "outside of my circle"....by the way, His Kiss....breathtaking...I need to find a woman who kisses like that :D

    DIIMOND--add your name to the list of people who are greatly appreciated for their heartfelt praise of my work...thank you

    everyone keep scribin'

    MJ
     
  9. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>floats in>

    There is nothing like enchantment to inspire the mind that urges the pen/ fingers to type words like this.

    Very nice my friend. I love the feeling it conveys.

    <floats out<...
     
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