Black Poetry : spell bound

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Feb 26, 2004.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    could it be in the way he ............
    or possible the day I ..............
    soon after the time We .....

    without reason respectively, objectively, subjectively we re-enter seasons
    bold colors of red/ grey painted stainless upon skies born to hear only the sounds that thunder from the beat of our hearts --flashing brilliant rays of sight to the untrained eyes ...... painted upon our stainless,stainless skies...
    Relentless cries drenched tamed to rain the hush lul- a - bies sung in We:Our brown/carmel nights set-a-fire just before black shown us as daylight ....

    Spell bound

    by the way he .......
    assured the day I .....
    each time We .......
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice poem....:)
    very nice
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bluewater .... much love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very smooth creativity love it
     
  5. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just off the top Rich .... yk how we do....good 2 hear from ya
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, I really liked this style, enjoyed reading this.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a great flow
    love the beginning
    and ending...
    very nice!
     
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