Black Poetry : Speechless

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Oct 8, 2002.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am speechless,
    And I’m not sure why...
    You’ve been serenading my mental since
    Your scribes first blessed my eye...
    No matter how I try
    I can't forget how sweetly, your language completes me...
    So uniquely,
    You are original~ly, SO
    'What I need right now'...
    Yet I still can't figure out how
    (When given the opportunity to finally speak to the object of my ____)
    I’m speechless?

    My words seem to betray me
    They are in no way
    A reflection of my current thoughts
    Or
    How I truly feel
    The true ‘Me’ is concealed
    Inside
    Silent stares and innocent blushes
    That are truthfully quite sweet
    Howeva that you’ve yet to see
    So until us two
    Can share a physical facial expression
    Which I’m sure would be ‘so right’
    I hope you can somehow feel
    What this language wouldn’t allow me to say
    And bring the hidden emotion to light
    Till then I’m
    Speechless~
     
  2. elayne.

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    wha?? somebody got You speechless brickhead?!

    she must talk an awful **** lot... or either she is just
    da bomb like dat!! :lol: either way... you been holdin'
    out on me!! & you know what i mean!! thank you for
    once again... blessin'!! :D

    itsallLove, chile. (4eva&eva)

    elayne.
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful, dear poet. this piece once again, almost makes me just that...speechless. thank you.


    ~~~poetiklyspeakin~~~
     
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    dawg i doubt anybody can make you speechless
    but if they did that says alot about them

    great masterful piece

    You are original~ly, SO
    'What I need right now'...
    Yet I still can't figure out how

    i was feeling that part der
    playa

    yo get at me email dun

    DSS
    peaace
     
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    beautifully written!! your flow is so smooth and your words make your point loud and clear!! lovin it!!
     
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    Nice scribe reas. Keep up da good work:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my bruh again u scribe great beauty tyght ..Reas
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooohh, i luuv flows like this!
    you gots to follow up!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Reas...
    Who is it that has touched your heart like this that you are speechless?
    My friend.... Your skills in every poem you write is excellent and very unique.
    You know I will be ckeckin for mo of ur flow..
    1 Love Babe and wonderful poem....:heart: :heart:
     
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    speechless...

    and breathless... two of my most favorite states of being...

    this was a beautiful read, Poet... per your usual!

    alyce
     
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