Black Poetry : SPEECHLESS

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speechless in the emptiness of my own words.
    Thoughts of you cross my mind unheard.
    Close my eyes and feel what I want to unfurl.
    Memories of you and me lost in a world.
    Lost in your eyes, hands on my thighs.
    Fingertips intertwined, trapped in disguise.
    Kisses I once dreamt, come to taste my lips.
    Just wanna sit in the scent of your esscence.
    Easy, so easy to sit down and write.
    How I need, how I want, love you in my life.
    I run every time I wanna explain.
    How I searched for the love that only you gave.
    And when I gave up then there you came.
    Whispering, tracing my body to your name.
    I get tongue-tied and I get hypnotized.
    I get comfortable in the luxury that your mine.
    I long to show how and what I feel.
    But what if you hurt my heart and I can’t heal?
    Flashbacks, fantasies, dreams all of you.
    Sexy, love me, show me what you can do.
    I get a little timid to show you the same.
    Close my eyes, dip your love, and speak your name.
    Speechless in the silence of my own love.
    Thoughts of you, me and you, a fantasy untouched...
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love how you put it down sista. have you had the baby yet. if so what did you have. have a good one love!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne:
    "SPEECHLESS" I luv it!!!
    Nothing like being rendered "SPEECHLESS"

    Very nice scribe poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speechless
    at the helms of ya love
    the untouched glist
    of u yourself
    the wonders of feeling
    left within speechless
    open let me in !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, this was really lovely. Something so beautiful, that you're careful about touching it, knowing how fragile and precious love can be. Wow.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody :)
    and yes i had a baby girl on October 8th nevar :)
     
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