Quiet Poetry Lounge : Speechless

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blaquebutterfli, Sep 7, 2003.

  1. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speechless
    in wonder
    I listen to a voice
    I think I could grow to love
    forever
    and gaze upon a face
    I would love to see
    with each mornings sunrise
    and wonder
    if I leave him
    Speechless too.
     
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    that was too sweet.. made me say AWW at the end
    smooth flow (snaps)
     
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    Short but SO sweet. It's so simple yet is says so much. I loved it.
     
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    this was beautifully pose'd
    as u become speechless
    from the maze of him
    before day light he too
    in the maze of ya voice
    and speechless i hear u
    the divine sound
    the warm whispers
    i hear it with amazment

    i love this it say so much with few wordz
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from the maze of him
    i lost in his voice
    fear i may never
    see the day light
    my sky again
    is this love
    or desperation?
    i know not
    so speechless
    i remain
    suspecting
    it's not me that
    leaves him
    speechless

    thanks for responding everybody!
     
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