Black Poetry : Speech Flows

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Jul 8, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We are two factors in the wrong equation

    and ...

    these vernacular waterfalls clearly falsify
    your feelings and leave you to
    drown in upswept emotional currents

    - choking from non-intellect
    - gasping for positive dialect

    badly in need of mind-to-m(eye)nd resuscitation

    So ...

    ... if you can't swim ~

    please

    ... get out of my sea ...




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is ill...as in tight...as in classic..."...get out of my sea"...Wow!

    blak
    verb
     
  3. baller

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    oooohhh...

    i'm drowning.

    let the river flow.
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    .....thank you .........you know I look 4ward to reading your responses Boo~

    One.
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller

    Don't panic, or you will definitely drown...

    pssst.... hey .... do you see that bouy in the middle of the lake? That's me .... hold on & I'll see to it that you're safe! :wink:


    Glad you checked this piece out!

    One.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I DID TAKE SWIMMING CLASS

    BUT WOW!! GET OUT YO SEA!!
    GLAD I CAN FLY!! lol:D
    GURL THIS BE ALL GOOD YA HEARD ME......!!:heart: :kiss:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ $$RICH$$

    You are 2 much ... good to know you are able to swim! :wink:

    Thank you for the read!

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  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A nice way tyo put it!

    Clear, concise and well done--Amun-Ra :cool:


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  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amun-Ra

    Hey now...thanx for stopping by to read me!

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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    N2

    you speak my language
    and i love it

    you are entertaining, no doubts
     
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