Black Poetry : Specks of Consciousness!

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  1. Akilles

    Akilles Banned MEMBER

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    I wrote this one some time ago. I recently with to the Apache Cafe and recited it in front of a small crowd and got some good responses. I am hoping yall feel it.


    Specks Of Consciousness.
    Specks Of Consciousness.

    Often on a clear night I stare up at the constellations,
    Glaring at the tiny specks of light with the most curious speculation,
    Whilst my mind is engulfed in the deepest meditation,
    Pondering upon the manifestations of its mircalous revealations,
    Humbled as I make my mental libations to the gods,
    Going about their heavenly stations,
    My humble silence says a prayer
    Asking them for their wisdom, faith and patience,
    My pious quest to know and understand Christ,
    And how He died for our salvation,
    And to hail His African mother,
    Whom`s pureness was unique amongst the tribes and nations,
    Amazed at how the Heavenly Father has blessed us,
    With prophets and guides throughout the generations,
    Who sacrificed to save us many times from the victimizations,
    Of our own self inflicted damnations,
    These are not stories of stark exaggerations,
    That has been concieved by human imaginations,
    But the glorification of actualizations,
    That has been preserved through mystifications,
    The cosmic formulation of symbolic expressions,
    Of things and events by geometric formations,
    A token of Divine organization governing,
    Infinite worlds filled with infinite living vibrations,
    Such deep comtemplations having come from one,
    Who has seemingly failed society`s most coveted examinations,
    However, is it not mere openness and not well spokeness?
    That is really the true mark of higher education,
    Man`s endless quest to know his origination,
    About the Creator and His vast creation,
    And yet all that we know compared to what we dont know,
    Is just a lopsided fraction in this enormous equation,
    But it is indeed a seed and if allowed to grow,
    It will eventually reach its germination,
    Embracing life`s lessons while erasing karmic incarnations,
    Evolving and advancing spirit to its highest formless elevation,
    Satisfied I continue my upward observations,
    Love guiding me to ponder our once blissful situation,
    Then the heavenly bodies lectured me on the timeless,
    Laws of attraction which have brought me to this realization,
    That our most delighted and wonderful expectations,
    And vivid dreams of romantic relations,
    Of all that we hoped for and wished to be between us,
    Was not in our stars,
    I shall frail not for destiny`s sake, for tiny specks
    Of God`s consciousness is all we truly are.................
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes deep consciousness alert and on the rise
    tyte drop here, well felt
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow poet very inspirational.
     
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    This piece flowed like drops of sunshine. Loved the concept, the rhythm and the rhyme. Excellent piece poet.
     
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