Black Poetry : special special dedication.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Oct 3, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the cusp of sweet dawn..
    l will see it clearly tomorrow-
    your entrance into my world

    l will hear its psalm
    heaven's alarm... beams from serenity
    of the peaceful azure sky- your first cry

    unforgettable
    one hundred years later
    l will still remember....

    when you took your first step on the grass
    you kept walking and laughing
    and to this day... you have me laughing at that...

    and your first fall..
    you cried to me as l kissed your slightly cut arm
    and a walking embrace with your head on my shoulder
    and a tear in your eye... you forgot about the pain
    falling asleep

    you are not just my daughter, but my favorite girl
    precious and pretty and the age of three
    God truly blessed me with the world..


    pt. 2

    dads show love to your daughters in the art of poetry!!!
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah...i like this oh man it is tight...
    work that pen....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my brutha whoaaaaaaaa!
    let the ink flow dis was the bomb !!!
    blow it up bruh !
     
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    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh j'hiah this was SO SO SO beautiful...
    people always talk about how boys need their fathers but believe me...so do girls...
    TRUST ME your daughter is as blessed to have you as you are she...
    because a God fearing man is a gift within itself...
    lovin this dedication...
    the more fathers like u we have the better off our people will be :)
    :heart: :toast: :luvv:
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is just precious!

    This made me miss my daddy, but it also made me remember the incredible love we shared and even though he has left this physical place I feel his presence always, my mother says I have his eyes and now I see much more of him as age refines my features...How proud I am to have had a father who loved and cherished me...You are a King among men and you are "Blessed"!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very beautiful...i wish all dads loved their daughters like this...much love to you...i think both of you are truly blessed.
     
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    this was so beautiful j hiah .....beautiful dedication
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    extremely touching and beautifully posed
     
  9. angelicsage

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    I've heard about this little lady that's stolen your heart
    as I have one too, also three...

    I'm so relating to this and the beauty of such a relationship
    is the most authentic of it's kind.

    She is truly, a blessed child, to have a father such as you...and
    your are equally blessed to have, the experience of her.

    *Sigh* J'hiah Encore:spinstar:
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww i love this...
     
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