Black Poetry : Special Delivery pt.II

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nita, May 25, 2004.

  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Extra Special Delivery

    Part I (Nita)
    The hour is 11
    and the minute is 32
    woke up in a hot sweat
    cause my body's needing you
    So I picked up the phone
    Placed my order real fast
    An Extra Special Delivery
    and it was there in a flash
    I don't like to play games
    So I got str8 tot he point
    Shoved you down on the bed
    then popped in a love joint
    finding our groove
    off our clothes we ripped
    warm honey over your body
    to go with your chocolate covered dip
    tastin and lickin
    gliding and stickin
    nails piercing your skin
    hot juices flowin within
    then I take you for a ride
    upon your peak I start to glide
    Wearin out the springs on my Sealy
    breakin your back, knowin you feel me
    and my name you gladly said
    on the headboard I crack your head
    biting your lip with every pump
    Got ya sounding like Forrest Gump
    up, up and away floE'n off love vibes
    feelin you so so deep inside
    lovin every inch of your Man's pride
    so I continue to enjoy the ride
    moans and groans
    our own sex show
    beyond rated X...
    more like rated whoa
    these are all of the things I did to you
    awaiting Jehiah's response in part II
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  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol

    Had to drop this one, it's been on the shelf too long. Hope you guys dig it.
     
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    -pats head with a cool towel...

    Making the reader get a little hot huh?
    The vibe of this piece was smooth and sexy. Keep it up
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol

    Thanks, I like to turn up the heat ery now and the...lol
    So you're in Memphis, I'm in Arkansas, actually, I'm about 50 miles from Memphis.
    I'm glad you came by to check me out. Be sure to peep out Special Delivery I in the Poetry Slam forum under Nita March Winner.
    Peace
     
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    WOW, NITA IM GOING TO HAVE TO TAKE A COLD SHOWER FOR THIS ONE
    LOVELY DROP
     
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    whew...this was some :hot:
    can't wait to see the continuance

    get your flow on girl...^5
     
  7. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol

    [email protected]
    Thanks bother,
    It's always good to see your replies and feedback,
    Sage, thank you sister... I guess it's on the way...lQQking...lol
    thanks famiily
    :grouphug:
     
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    QQ....whew....... :eek:hmy:
    NITA MAE!!! gurl this was hot
    ............smh........i tell ya
    :hot: thas it tight lay sis
    Peace
    Angel.........smh

    where ya at Jehiah QQ
    :lol: cant wait to read his part .......
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol

    MBA I don't know if Jehi will respond, I kinda had to call him out, Jehiah, I'll understand if ya can't hang...I mean respond...lol

    Thanks MBA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now dis was hot and had me jumppin
    wooooooweeeeeeeee!! Nitaaaaaaaaaaaa.......
     
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