Black Poetry : Speaks for itself!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is yo game tight?
    Is yo head right?
    Is you home alright?
    Do you pray?
    Is you scribe tight?
    Is you mind right?
    Is you life alright?
    Is your relationship tight?
    DO YOU KNOW?
    Are you speding to much
    time with that bullshnit on
    yo mind?
    Are you giving 100% in all
    you do?
    Do you see so much wrong
    and nothing right?
    Do you go to bed with a headache
    at night?
    Are you part of the solution or part
    of the problem...
    Do you make them or do you solve
    them?
    Do you know?
    If you answer yes ...to most of this
    information quest...
    The the rest will speak for itself!
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was so on point .......speak for itself !!!
     
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    yeap..speaks for itself...
    nice read...
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one applies to me. I should ask myself these questions. Thanks for this one.
     
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    this difinitely speaks for itself and it very tight!!!!!
     
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    speaks for itself AND others lol :)
     
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    INDEED, It speaks for itself.

    Nice Scribe.
     
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    msluciousb
    You slammed on this one...

    " Are you speding to much
    time with that bullshnit on
    yo mind? "

    The answer is easy.. the soul lution is a tough one. Like a pill that is to big. I can't get it down. Sometimes in order to fix things.. you have to tear them up. Not my nature...So I chip at the pill. Swallowing it piece meal.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had to put it out there!

    Always as I write , I write about what is important or currently affecting me...
    The bible says "As a man thinketh...so shall he be" So it speaks for itself!
    Thanks for reading and responding!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    you speaketh
    wordz of truth
    negative vibes
    come home to roost
    meditation can give you juice
    and your metality a boost
    if ya scatterbrain and loose...

    i love your poetry msb....
    peace
    khasm
     
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