Black Poetry : Speakin from da heart ( not a luv poem)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deep_lyrikz, Dec 10, 2003.

  1. deep_lyrikz

    deep_lyrikz Member MEMBER

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    Do you ever notice
    when you get big they swarm like lotus
    they try come and take ya focus
    -and you know this ( man)-
    Do you ever fell like you caged in the world trapped like a clam and you the perl
    you try to make it in this life
    but cant seem to see the light
    or believe thats its right
    to be happy to be black man
    Thinking while yo u still can
    See i thank the lord everyday cause im still alive
    In my hood eveyday i see girls gettin raped and all i wanna do is cry
    but i sit an wonder why
    contimplating suiscide
    but its cool my pain is makin me strong
    dont worry moma you aint go wrong
    Im here forever and im tellin you to hold on
    i came from the under a rock in corner of hell
    trying to rise up above the multitude of black without that detour to jail
    Stable mind in a black head
    i guess id better to be the best than a dumb bred
    Im a black, persuasive, innovatie, creative, st louis hood native, nuf said
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yeah st. louie aint no joke
    neither is east st. louie...
    welcome to da land of poetic delight
    feel free to drop ya midwest insight
    day or night...aiight?
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    happy u here to share and build poetically
    indeed st.louie no joke fo real i feel ya scribe
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your flow is "Real"...
    and I'm lovin all of it...

    Welcome...and Encore!
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very pleased 2 meet U fellow mental.

    Soulfully felt the strong, positive intro.

    Be a true warrior, learn & strengthen from the war.

    Peace.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello:wave: Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    oh wow
    your flow
    is so tight
    Peace
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee...Deep_lyrikz

    I know where your coming from. I'm a St.Louis native. Now in Cali. is it flowing that way, in the streets of Grand. Crossing Delmar. Into Blackjack land. Speaking in cities, places and time. They are taking the city. Increasing the crime. Forest Park, Kingshighway by trade. Rolling Union City. Places I grade. Northside. Page, Keeping it real. NaturalBridge crossing the way I feel.

    Keep your focus. It is getting rough on those streets. In the hood I creeped.
     
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