Black Poetry : Speak...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Mar 18, 2004.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sweet sister, triniti, U did it...

    You've etched a place in the depths of my mental with this.

    Speak & be heard....

    .....Speak 2 be heard.

    Peace.
     
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    Kamau~ Active Member MEMBER

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    Wow poetess,the message that you conveyed is truly a magnificent one.I am honored for this to be my first reply in this extremely creative place on the net.Please, continue to prose your thoughts and ideas for all to see, because your wordz have touched me.
     
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    speak and be heard
    allow yourself your time to
    speak and be heard
    word after word
    AND
    SPEAK
    and be
    HEARD


    i feel this vibe
    very smooth my sista.......
    love it...
    flow on wit ya
    bad self
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi nita :wave:

    boy, i liked this waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay betta than that 'colon' poem u did :lol: .

    mental copulation: hhmmmmm, gonna hv 2 ponder the visual on this one. :luvv:

    thanks nita, nice vibe
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the way you let your pen flow with this groove. This was definitely heard.
     
  7. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti,

    Thas a nice flow
    i'ma let it go
    unsheath my pen
    put my words in the win'
    free my soul
    speak out loud and bol'

    Nice Write...........
    keep speakin'
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I were to begin naming African Queens such as…
    Queens…Amina, Candace, Cleopatra VII, Dahia-Al Kahina, Hatshepsut, Makeda
    Nandi, Nefertari, Nefertti, Nehanda, Nzingha, Tiye, Yaa Asantewa

    Even they would be paled by comparison…

    You are so baaaaaaad…Webster would need to create a new word…
    (Within all languages) to describe “Queen Triniti”

    All Hale…your presence is albeit, "Royally" intimidating…


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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dear sis..
    you have release
    a powerful scribe
    ah my sister, our sister
    Queen Triniti..flow it deep
    nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhhhh
    I do love it here at the school of triniti :read:

    Gurl, it is so nice of you to bust us a flow. This is tight, crisp and beautiful (as usual). Roll on, sister, cause it's always a treat comin from you. :star:
     
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