Black Poetry : SPEAK TO MY HEART

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If ever it appears I do not hear
    the words your lips release
    its not because I do not understand
    my heart only comprehends
    when you speak to it

    Sometimes I may confuse you
    with my enured attitude
    but you tend to blow my peaceful mood
    and break my graceful stride causing me
    to retreat inside my shell
    because I do not have the energy
    to deal with your insensitive
    displays of emotions

    So let me explain to you
    exactly what it is I need
    if you want to succeed

    I need you to speak to my heart
    with unconditional sincere tender love and care
    because there is where
    you will discover there are no limits
    to my love if you are my lover

    I know my sensual demeanor
    drives you insane and all your mental
    can concentrate on
    is making me moan your name
    Don’t get me wrong….
    I enjoy the erotic exchange

    But then what’s next
    once the sweat from our untamed sex
    has dried and we’ve both
    been totally submerged inside
    each others insides
    and all the orgasmic rides
    have ceased

    I know what it is you seek
    but yet your unable to reach it
    close but yet so far
    your not trying to win a prize
    we’re talking about my heart

    You must speak to it in the language
    it understands, if I have to interpet
    and need a translator to decifer
    your intentions you will never
    get to whats within

    Speak to my heart with
    words laced with 4EVERLUV
    phrases drenched in kisses and hugs
    actions that demonstrate
    what you say….
    is just that…..what you say
    and mean it….

    Not some trickery with intentions
    to deceive me
    leaving my heart aching and grieving
    because I trusted and believed it

    I’m a simple woman
    never asking to receive what
    I am not willing to give myself
    so please know that your not in this alone
    the astrological planets say
    I create the best and happiest home

    So if your not afraid of love
    that
    Soothes and massages you
    to the abyssal part of your soul

    I dare you to....
    Speak to My Heart

    :hearts1:
     
  2. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know thats right.... I double daaawg dare ya, to speak to my heart... Cas that otha mess you be talkin....shooot, brutha-man please....he he he... lol

    all jokes aside Luv-ley this was tight. The heart does have a language all it's own, and it is very seperate from sex, ain't it?

    Great flow sweetie...
     
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    4everluv,

    Your pieces are always filled with so much emotion,
    this is no different...

    Sometimes, my gurl....we just have to lay it on the line
    our needs and wants and you've done it so eloquently in this piece.

    Simply lovely.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    I could speaketh so da heart would know
    tell it things that will make it flow
    see the heart is where i reside and go
    da heart surely is where i'll grow
    and you will hear me speak fo sho
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:

    My heart is open patiently awaiting
    the vibrations from the baritone of your voice
    and the solace of your words
    if only you could speak to it in a dialect its never heard
    recovered from past hurts and disappointments
    but yet still capable and willing to luv you strong
    before you can capture it you must prove
    that by choosing you the choice would never be wrong
    I desire to share with you all that is internally me
    but first you must seduce the deepest
    and most protected part of me
    lover are you capable of easing my every fear
    I don’t want to walk away from you
    so please just let me hear you
    Speak to my heart​
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet apple*pie:
    Yes the heart does. Thanks sweet
    for the read and the words of support.



    epiphany:
    Your words are very true. Something I am
    not very good at is hiding my feelings.
    Most people that know me always say
    you can always tell what I'm feeling. I
    never have a problem with letting you know.
    I always appreciate your vists and your
    kinds words.


    Much Luv
     
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    words of my voice
    will drift real deep
    cascade inside giving da heart a treat
    make it beat in a sweet tune
    change all things dat went wrong
    bring back a flava so strong
    ya heart will hear me deeply long
    and know i am da one
    speaking to da heart will be an uncore
    a return and much more.
     
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    directness is a thing of beauty...

    ...when understood for what it is.

    "Speak to my heart with
    words laced with 4EVERLUV
    phrases drenched in kisses and hugs
    actions that demonstrate
    what you say….
    is just that…..what you say
    and mean it…."

    like you, i love laying my ALL on the table, first...so that i may always be understood for what, and who, i am. BEAUTIFUL SCRIBE.
     
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    um

    i talk to your heart directly
    affectionately
    so you smile when you mention me
    dr. love got the remedy

    i'm a quick learner
    put a stop to that heart murmur
    make you feel like tina without ike turner
    once you cure the heart you need not go further

    i hear your heart talking my ear to the chest
    understanding your angle and you needing the best
    the next move
    you should'nt have to guess
    it's to speak heart to heart and relieve that stress

    great write 4EVERLUV
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello 4Ever...

    :wave:
    I am offically annoucing, I am a fan!:)

    Fantastic write!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:hearts1:
     
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