Quiet Poetry Lounge : Spanish Love (Amor español)

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Necesitar su cuerpo Fenning para usted Adorando su cuerpo que Besa en usted Im que jadea para aliento que Toca
    su alma que Frota el Pelo de dedos quiere seda se Imagina mi amor Obtiene agarrado en el éxtasis Usted Sí Mami
    Usted Es mi todo Mi todo Mi tierra Mi Luna el Aliento Mi Aire que es uno Con Usted
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is how it would translate out-

    Needing your body Fenning for you Worshiping your body that Kisses you Im the breath that Touches your soul that Rubs your Hair fingers like silk
    Imagine my love caught in the ecstacy of You Yes Mommy You Are my all My all My land My Moon My Breath My Air that is one With You
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Sister
    I wanted to do something
    Unique that would challenge
    The mind and south soul
    Much Love Sister Ifu, and TY
     
  4. Tiana

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    que usted esta diciendo???? tu espanol es muy confuso :confused:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First Part-that you this saying
    yes im no perfect-lol

    Second Part-yes my spanish little confused
    Sh-- has me confused
    Just started taking classes
    Through my job mami

    I promise next time it will be better-lol
     
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    I got the gist of what you were saying, but hey I'm not fluent, so I needed the translation. This read like a sultry love note.
     
  7. Tiana

    Tiana Active Member MEMBER

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    claro que si you arent the best :) but its a nice effort
    You want to use more punctuation in your espanol becuz
    words have different meanings when they stand next to certain verbs
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    change in da script ........
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah trying to do
    Something different
    Brother $$RICH$$
     
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    THAT IS JUST THE DEEPEST EXPRESSION FOR ANOTHER HUMAN BEING THAT I HAVE EVER READ. REAL TIGHT KEEP DOING YOUR THING AND STAYING TRUE TO THAT LOVE CAUSE IN THE END YOUR LOVE IS ALL THAT WILL FREE YOU.
     
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