Khasm13 : space and time...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i know you want this to work
    but i need some space and time
    to clear up my mind
    this relation has been less than kind
    on my heart
    that you put up in the meat grind
    i need to search and find
    answers
    to expunge this cancer
    that has infested my once peaceful soul
    cause the embers of your treatment
    still burns hot like coal
    out of control

    please let me have some peace
    so i can try and get my mind at ease
    and to get these demons to release
    their gigantic grip
    many times you flipped the script
    to make me think it was me
    that was nondescript
    like i had no flavor at all
    but it was you
    covering up lies that were tall
    that caused my physical frame to fall
    into this new place
    that i don't reconize
    surrounded by this wall
    please don't call
    or write
    or send messages through our friends
    cause that just might
    make me never want to see you again
    im a man
    and i know the extent of my limitations
    this situation that im facing
    has my mind racing
    and my soul chasing
    an answer
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all need that space and time..seeing, feeling, being ...feeling you deep on this flow.
    Peace
     
  3. Khasm13

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    thanks for understanding blue
    peace
    khasm
     
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    it's not what I thought it would be from the title but I liked it none the less
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very heartfelt for you Khasm...
    I can feel the negativity and pain...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. Khasm13

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    nahshon---people probably already think that
    i'm too metaphysical in this board
    so sometimes i have to flip it up...
    thanks for the read

    play---it beez like that sometimes...
    if i had not experienced a full spectrum of emotions
    i would be a limited poet...thanks gurl

    peace
    khasm
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    checkin' the versatility but I ain't surprised
    do tha thang
     
  8. Khasm13

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    thanks skrybe...
    btw...nice poetry site
    peace
    khasm
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow....emotional too...
     
  10. Khasm13

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    thanks for the read lovely
    peace
    khasm
     
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