Black Poetry : Sovereignty ~ Don't Go There

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't go there trying to be persausive
    Don't want your bad credit scored
    Don't celebrate with such elation
    Don't flaunt that evil doer's lore

    Don't mix no ape with my creation
    Don't let nobody steal your joy
    Don't want no Bush administration
    Don't want them messing with our boys

    Don't ever divide me and conquer
    Don't play us on God's good firm earth
    Don't tell me I'm just going bonkers
    Don't weed out drugs the munchies thirst

    Don't wanna pay no alimony
    Don't want her treating me like dirt
    Don't want environmental hazards
    Don't want no Red Sox' curse reversed

    Don't sell me on a television
    Don't tell me superman escaped
    Don't sell me an old blue-eyes' vision
    Don't yell out (((fear))) on news at eight

    Don't reinvent dang blaxploitation
    Don't circumvent the charge of hate
    Don't underestimate the nation

    Her sovereignty ~
    Its new mandate :time:


    Darryl Abdu Omari :danger:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is such a great piece.
    I really enjoyed reading it,
    it kept me thinking the whole
    thing through...
    "KEEP EM COMIN"..1
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzMelanie2u2, I am forever grateful for your support, this makes me very happy.

    Thanks.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome brutha love the flava on this piece
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HECK YEAH!!!

    Brotha you got skillz to make em illz. :teach:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, GEMPIS, come hell or high water friends... you are there.

    I remain ever so thankful ~ :hearts2:
     
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    I always leave your threads with new thoughts to ponder my brotha :thinking:
    I am glad that some things never change :thinking: :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You tend to see what I think many of us do, yet usually don't pen it down, or if we do, not quite this way. Keep on scribing in that 1poet kind of way.
     
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    Triniti, Watz, thank you very much!
     
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