Black Poetry : southern skin...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Jun 15, 2003.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey coated her
    5’4” milk chocolaty frame
    of creamy rich
    Southern Skin

    She sat beneath
    Palm trees
    {on the sunny side of Capri}
    where sea breezes
    Caressed
    Southern Skin
    And danced across
    Twisted locks

    Eyes closed
    She envisioned his
    Manliness
    And made believe
    He kissed the
    Central parts of her
    Southern(ness)
    Glistening
    In the radiance of
    Sunlight’s last gleam

    She moaned
    To the rumble of
    Body quakes
    As raging waves of fantasy
    Enveloped her

    As a shadow tiptoed across
    Her Southern thighs
    She opened her eyes
    To find me
    Admiring
    The smoothness of her
    Southern Skin

    I thought of an Isley’s tune”
    “Hello there
    how are you doing tonight
    can I keep it real
    and say what’s on my mind?”

    with her staring at me
    expectantly
    I walked away from
    Southern Skin
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Baller dis was tyte ..............man u drop a bomb here !
     
  3. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As her eyes pleaded...
    Stay...
    :heart:
    You should have....

    That was sad...and touched my soul
     
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    This was cool...great imagery.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool... calm, collected-
    Baller is much respected!
     
  6. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHY WHY WHY, you walked away shot caller? dat was me all chocolatey...


    I'm just sayin...
     
  7. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin dis bra...especially wit me being a "southern belle" myself.

    Keep on keepin on love

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS for the responses, fellow scribes...sometimes, you're just not in the mood to play...regardless of the invitation.:)

    let the river flow.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man...I feel this :) next time don't walk away :devil:
     
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