Black Poetry : SOUTHERN COMFORT

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tranquility of love
    my life's intellect
    for the comforting
    of her southerness
    i rest inside my
    chamber of rapture
    intoxicated by her
    she is my slumber
    i sleep deeply in view
    as i drift into eternity
    my soul become da pillars
    of perfectional joy
    penetrating lifting spirits
    upon da stars we rise
    we become a source
    from vowed love
    my devotional loyality
    points me south
    i now examine her fibers
    da morals of her beings
    and capture da orbs of
    her worth she is my queen
    we stand equally upon
    da cloud, floating, drifting
    from da blowing gentle breeze
    my heart race from her love
    she was southern comfort​
     
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    hot sticky romance
    have you trapped in the past
    humidity raptures your being
    as she takes you upon her parable sayings
    souls of the black and strong survive
    spirits from the grave
    storytale alive
    black dames and gentlemen
    horse and carriage, plantation
    remember when love so gentle and so sweet?
    remember when the essence knocked you off your feet?
    remember when heaven gazed in your eyes?
    tender kisses left you mezmorized?
    remember when brown lovers of all different shades
    intertwined delicately
    intricately woven
    under the dark blue skies
    stars sparkling like champagne toast reprise
    still in heaven i remember you my lover
    you were more than my brotha
    you were you
    still so much i have to discover
    when i look at you
    a mighty fortress
    of dignified youth
    regalistic splendor
    i gaze upon your stature
    hoping for promises of ya tender kisses
    make me your misses
    i wear ya heart in my truth
    ooooh, i remember the way
    you used to touch me
    and hold me, caressing, my body
    and only
    just solely for me
    oooooh, brown toasty cinnamon skin
    infatuated smile brightening up dreams
    hair so georgeous thick curls lay apon thy head
    if i was ya only one
    we treasured on and on and on end
    talking from morning till day, till noon
    such a sweet escape
    i was your horn and you were my flute
    such a sweet song
    as i longed to belong to you
    oh, remembering that way
    i do appreciate you
    more and more
    your regal youth and your regal ways....
    capture all of your splendor

    good job rich, flow head, taking me back in time where luv was mine
     
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    The moments untouched
    in tyme existance we was
    still the flute play soft notes
    upon the shinning smile u pose
    my heart captrues it faithfully
    as our love rivered out in hope
    those moments shared is priceless
    yet we never bottled them up
    just step aside for a day now
    here we are again to stay in vow
    of our beauty and from da beast
    u and i deep and unique
    ya tender warmth fulfilled my heart
    as i leave my devotion to start
    ur my charm my black pearl
    more then my sista my humble gurl
    my love is comfort in your grace
    every time i vision ya face
    we have been in to a different place
    but we never let go of this case
    of loving ur still my harp string
    and the musical note i sing
    u bring me joy , how can i let go!
    ya splendor is divine........................
     
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    harmony rekindled that fire
    dreaming of you held me through winter
    oooh, being held in your sweet embrace
    loving you i like you this way
    still i plead my case
    decisions had me swept in plage
    i offer a remedy for luv's unwanted stain
    reuniting and it feels so good to be out of the rain
    thoughts of you i can't contain
    overflow of ya blessings are rare through lifes detressings
    i'm just confessing that my knees get weak
    when i hear ya tender voice
    can't hold these feelings inside
    any longer i need to retreat
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOOOOHHH RICHIE CUT IT OUT BOOOOOOOOOOOOYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    YEAH I WUZ REALLY FEELIN IT

    SOUTHERN COMFORT
    LET ME BE UR SOUTHERN COMFORT
    WHILE U SIPP ON SOUTHERN COMFORT
    AND LET US CONVERT
    TO LOVERS IN THA MIDST
    TAKE ME TO HEAVEN
    FROM THA FIRST LUVABLE KISS
    MMMMMMMUUUAAAAHHHH

    IMA LEAVE IT AT THAT BOO!
    WHOOO STEAMY!LOL
     
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    every moment is embraced
    and the sweet look on ya face
    i trace da beauty of essence
    this time this place
    as my love drift in caress
    need not plea anymore
    ya my core my door to fulfill
    confess let it sweep me deep
    i'll be ya strength when ya weak
    be the voice when u can't speak
    be da love ya heart will feel
    bring warmth never chills
    dry the rain storm wit sunny glaze
    and be ya raptured blaze
    swim da ocean cross da sea
    to beside such love like thee
    open da flood gate so one may see
    i am still lit ole me and ready
    tenderly my D.S comforting tree.
     
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    Platinum
    like southern sweets
    and beauty i keep
    ya soul of grace
    my heart now face
    in the comfort zone
    be my and i'll be yo
    as we drift into a flow
    from da rise of our eyez
    forever i will mesmerize
    so we can de-vour love.
     
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    Rich, you my homie fa real
    not to mention you're laced with skill
    When i look at the first moment
    My heart got steep
    I realized my life would be owned by your mansion and dome of protection and sudden relief
    gazin at the streets i see yesterday
    where lovers walked in manhattan park
    fly guys whistled their part
    big flirts was famin to break the rules
    where they took ya heart to school
    still luv run deep
    i feel humbled and meek
    to infuse into one
    i rest in thy arms
    and gaze on to a new start
    we've only just begun...
     
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    LETS RISE
    SO HIGH
    ABOVE THE CLOUDS
    ABOVE THE SKY
    WHILE U RUB MY THIGH
    WE SMILE
    N LOOK DEEP INTO EACHOTHERS EYES
    WE KNO WUTZ INSIDE
    WE KNO WUT IZ OUT
    INTERTWINED IN EACHOTHER
    WE KNO WUT EACHI Z ABOUT
    FROM HEAD TO TOE
    U ARE MINEZ TO KEEP AS I AM URS
    TOGETHER BOTH OF OUR SOULS SOAR
    ME NEEDING U
    U NEEDING ME
    WE REJOYCE
    BECUZ OF WHAT WEVE GROWN TO BE
     
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    Desert Stoem
    we go together
    like hand & glove
    taking love up above
    from the mist of da past
    we still as one to
    forever last on waves
    i've seen da change
    ya my storm my heart
    a love so free it nolonger
    me but a we yes likewise
    sweetie .......................
     
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