Black Poetry : SOUTH BEACH WAITER (SOBE WAITER)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jun 1, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 11, 2006
    Messages:
    1,919
    Likes Received:
    198
    Ratings:
    +222
    SOUTH BEACH WAITER (SOBE WAITER)

    So whack and loud as the black crowd visit the exhibits it’s
    A bold blunder like out of control thunder explicit and legit
    Become hater mad and waiters get had sometimes I wanna quit
    My job rather than git involved with dishonest tourists many don’t
    Pay for food plus attitude rude like a barbaric tribe being civilize won’t
    Hurt your pride, we’re being a reject plus this affect us on the website
    You write scripture complaining, bright picture you’re straining our polite
    Character right here in America, black folks being abused hurts, some
    Waitresses refuse to work being accused of being jerks, police alerts come
    Warning us of crime and it scorning our mind to have to deal with this
    We hope this pass as girls are groped and harass the crowd produce a list
    Of unwanted stuff , nobody prefer this jive we have to survive with a brisk
    Pay checks, black folks lets out reach to South Beach be clever and major
    Bring a better behavior on Memorial Day come in a pastorial way my pager
    Beeps with freaks calling that be on the streets balling there some of our
    Restaurants would rather shut down than deal with sluts and clowns the power
    Of respect will correct many faults plenty of us are taught well so why show
    Out yall know about god and what’s right and what’s wrong and that’s the flow
    Of the ocean trouble never cease, no real potion to double peace I just don’t know
    On black beach week security heighten like the purity of Titan cops become
    Giants trying to rule the earth using street psychology and greek Mythology from
    The days of Zeus, the facts are corruptr no need to act up on memorial weekend
    So black folks lets come together don’t be dumb be true and clever stop freaking
    On SOUTH BEACH IN MIAMI, look Will Smith was ill with the song MIAMI
    Let build a strong place for our family to travel on gravel and unravel the calamity
    And fun (HEY LETS ACT RIGHT ON SOUTH BEACH FROM NOW ON)
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Unfortunately, when a handful of us act out, we're labeled as all of us being out of control. We have to think of ourselves as a collective, even when out "just having fun". Smooth flow.
     
  3. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 22, 2007
    Messages:
    174
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    I'll definitely agree with Lady Watz...wonderful rhyme!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    man ya red hot off da press droppin mad lyrics and rhyme
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 11, 2006
    Messages:
    1,919
    Likes Received:
    198
    Ratings:
    +222
    THANKS FOR THE PROPS ON THIS ONE FOR REAL YALL
     
  6. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 11, 2006
    Messages:
    1,919
    Likes Received:
    198
    Ratings:
    +222
    Even a wet jerk needs a car to get to work and gas prices
    Is causing a fast crisis my task slices in two, eat mass rices
    With stew can’t buy meat to eat because of expensive petro
    So intensive in the ghetto our economy defensives won’t let go
    Of my pay check so I stay wrecked at filling stations experiencing
    A thrilling situation fuel prices killing the nation and piercing
    Our pocket for real,
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 18, 2006
    Messages:
    622
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    very wise flow
    i was feeling it
    so flow on
     
  8. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 11, 2006
    Messages:
    1,919
    Likes Received:
    198
    Ratings:
    +222
    GHETTOAMBITION thanks for the props on this one homey for real
     
Loading...