Black Poetry : SOUR CREAM & ONION

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Pickin of patch
    sour lable whackz
    creamy dream
    my mind now smackz
    inner power lackz
    of the lazy strud
    pickin bottoms
    onion cry, weepin
    like willow swinging
    in da misty breeze
    muddy trail ahead
    raw labor abound
    sourcream & onion
    shift aroma tame'd
    Just no milk and honey
    cheap labor of money
    rainy days not sunny
    now i'm running
    back into the yesteryears
    on translucent paper
    sour notes and creamy view
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this had a little BB King Blues on the bayou beat...i enjoyed this
    sometimes the mind drifts to the yesteryears at times we can learn from that drift.....thanks for sharing this one ....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Like the way you laid this down RIch, always nice to read your writes
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U know Angel it's the trail taken that you fine self back on thankz a million queeneth one


    big thankz THEONE i too enjoy your creation we have to hook up on one soon ya know.
     
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    peace,

    a picture well painted bruh...............a nice taste of Poetic "dip"
     
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    This one had a melancholy vibe, not all glimpses into the past are cheerful, but it can help to revisit that place. Nice introspective piece.
     
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    thankz info-moetry for the visit of taste

    thankz watz indeed not aways as bright yet fulfilling to return sometime
     
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