Black Poetry : Sound of My Walk

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  1. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sound of my Walk…..

    Fuzziness of raindrops
    Steam seeping off wine glasses
    Filled with
    Merlot

    Thumps of blood pumped inside
    Freshly lotion-ed skin touched by
    Affirmations from God​

    Wine glass lay
    (Filled with addictions of me)
    On tables, made from almond trees

    Reclaiming me with every
    Touch of earth

    God’s on your side
    (Trying to tell you something)
    God’s on your side

    Heels on pavement
    Rooting fresh (Man) goes

    Toe’s lifted in the air
    The smell of romance
    On the tip of this little
    Pig and that little piggy
    Itsy bitsy

    Inside the 10th cloud (serendipity’s play stool)
    (Looking past)The 9th it was perfect for some
    The 10th is far reaching
    Quiet, simple, direct
    (Made for me)


    Fuzziness of raindrops
    Dangling from the branch of an
    Almond tree in the middle of my soul​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i like this walk
    very well done sistah
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautifully written
    likes the vibe
    thanks for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the continued encouragement. I love the energy ya'll put off you are my audience. And if you are pleased then I have done my job~
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** gurl, ya flows are amazing...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep serene images in this, keep the flows coming.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *wow*...I, of all people...
    am actually speechless...
    even if I tried to express
    how *MAGNIFICENT* your
    work is...I couldn't...
    I'm in Awe...
     
  8. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU KNOW

    Thank you! That means so much to me I have been trying to perfect my craft!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EW, you are a master of your craft, indeed. This is just pure art, solely beautiful. Wow, wow, wow.
     
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    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS A VERY GOOD DROP!!!!
    WELL DONE!!
    MUCH LOVE!!!
     
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